Love

Loneliness has faded away; Joy now boldly shining through
Once an empty heart is now filled to the top with a lusty haze
Velcro is jealous of how close we are to one another
Eternity will be over before our hearts go their separate ways
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Ellison Avatar
September 15, 2012 at 11:19 AM
Two phrases caught my attention in the sweet write, Sabrina! "velcro is jealous" and "eternity will be over..." Congratulations on your win! Love and hugs, Jack
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September 5, 2012 at 7:16 PM
Sabrina , congratulations, in the " Define Love! " contest.. Enjoyed all winners.. xox~pd
Macfarlane Avatar
September 5, 2012 at 3:34 PM
Lovely write Sabrina.......congrats on your win! Hugs
Brown Avatar
September 5, 2012 at 7:31 AM
Congratulations on your placement in SKAT's "Define Love" contest Sabrina. Love, Carol
A  Avatar
September 4, 2012 at 6:10 PM
SABRINA, Congrats in my contest. Thank you for the support~SKAT
Palmer Avatar
September 1, 2012 at 8:28 PM
the depth of love,great write Sabrina
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