L-O-V-E

I want
You
To
Live
And
Die
With
ME.
You are truly a blessing.
     
               You
     Make         the
  World             go
Round              and
Round.             Let's
     Join             As
      One          In
              Love.
You                      are
 My                      Peace
  You                  are
    My                 Heart
     You             are
       My           Strength
        That's    Why
           I Love You.   

Let me be the one that will
Hold,
Protect,
And take care of you.
I simply
Want
US to make OUR dreams come true.


Pace, G
INK-U-SCRIPT

05-03-2012
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Yuzilaitis Avatar
June 10, 2014 at 1:46 PM
Thats SO creative :)
Ink-U-Script Avatar
June 10, 2014 at 2:06 PM
I really appreciate you stopping by..Thank you!!
Hill Avatar
September 18, 2013 at 9:31 PM
now that would make a great valentine card. well done.
Fryzel Avatar
August 23, 2012 at 8:30 PM
beautiful poem i wish i wrote it.... lol your a wounderfull man : D LUV~Sammie~
A   Avatar
June 19, 2012 at 1:10 PM
HI, urgent lol... you got mail! you got mail!
Ink-U-Script Avatar
June 19, 2012 at 2:12 PM
oK.
Irisha Avatar
June 5, 2012 at 7:14 AM
Aww Sweet.
Ink-U-Script Avatar
June 5, 2012 at 7:42 AM
lol..Thank you dearly for sharing with me Twanna!! Hugs
Christian Avatar
June 4, 2012 at 1:33 PM
aww wow thats so lovley, so romaticly written God bless you from diane
Ink-U-Script Avatar
June 4, 2012 at 1:35 PM
Thank you so much!!
Shines Avatar
June 1, 2012 at 8:51 AM
beautiful
Ink-U-Script Avatar
June 1, 2012 at 9:08 AM
Thank you sweetheart!!!
Sanderson Avatar
May 31, 2012 at 3:25 AM
"you are so remarkable! Carma"
Ink-U-Script Avatar
May 31, 2012 at 5:41 AM
Thank-you always Carma!!
Cheesman Avatar
May 25, 2012 at 5:53 AM
Love your contemporary flavour Pace. You are one big heart that has lots of love to give i am sure.......Shaz
Ink-U-Script Avatar
May 25, 2012 at 2:30 PM
Thank you so much Shaz!!
Davis Avatar
May 22, 2012 at 9:09 PM
i knew it! halleleujah, another great peice of art..loving the free verse.
Ink-U-Script Avatar
May 23, 2012 at 5:37 AM
Thank you...all smiles!!!
Lyrics Avatar
May 22, 2012 at 5:32 AM
The poem and the structure is absolutely FANTASTIC!
Ink-U-Script Avatar
May 22, 2012 at 8:51 AM
Thank you so kindly!!
Garrison Avatar
May 16, 2012 at 6:46 PM
Love, love, love it!! You always brighten my day with your poetry!!
Ink-U-Script Avatar
May 17, 2012 at 1:07 PM
Lol..Thank you sweetheart!!
Garrison Avatar
May 16, 2012 at 6:46 PM
Love, love, love it!! You always brighten my day with your poetry!!
Ink-U-Script Avatar
May 17, 2012 at 1:08 PM
Big Hugs!!
Lu Avatar
May 15, 2012 at 9:34 AM
WOOOOWWWWW! Nice one!!!! and by the way, you are doing quite well here for only being here a short time. I've been here 6 years, never saw anyone excell soooo quickly. Bravo! Cindy
Ink-U-Script Avatar
May 15, 2012 at 9:42 AM
Thank you!!
Lu Avatar
May 15, 2012 at 9:34 AM
WOOOOWWWWW! Nice one!!!! and by the way, you are doing quite well here for only being here a short time. I've been here 6 years, never saw anyone excell soooo quickly. Bravo! Cindy
Ink-U-Script Avatar
May 15, 2012 at 9:42 AM
I'm totally at a lost of words Cindy..That has to be the most..sorry, I can't even finish the sentence..almost to tears. That really meant alot to me.!!! Thank you Muah
Christian Avatar
May 12, 2012 at 12:56 PM
aw thats beautiful, thanks for your kind comments on my poem God understands
Ink-U-Script Avatar
May 12, 2012 at 4:26 PM
No problem!! And thank you!!
Mac Donald Avatar
May 10, 2012 at 1:54 PM
This is so cleverly done, Pace! Oh, I'm sure once she's read this, and knows full well your, "who", how could she resist your charm!!:) Thank you for the comment, I feel I am the one who is privledged! Stay well, and keep writing...your thoughts and words are insirational! Best wishes, Mikki
Ink-U-Script Avatar
May 10, 2012 at 2:34 PM
You give me the chills..Thank you!! smiles!!
Murphy Avatar
May 9, 2012 at 8:45 PM
Very creative! I hope she enjoys you!
Ink-U-Script Avatar
May 10, 2012 at 4:36 AM
Smiles!!! Thank you for sharing.
Kearley Avatar
May 7, 2012 at 8:24 PM
BRAVO~BRAVO~BRAVO~!!! X-celent write! I LOVE the LOVE... :o) I see you are getting your words out there too... Keep it flowing~~~ Oh,and thank you for your comments on my poem...Glad you got to see my new world...Ha,ha
Ink-U-Script Avatar
May 7, 2012 at 8:35 PM
Thanks Dan for dropping in!!!
Allen Avatar
May 6, 2012 at 5:42 PM
Awe Pace this is wonderful and I just love it. How cleaver of you. You made me smile. Keep up the good work sweetie. Huggs TLee
Ink-U-Script Avatar
May 6, 2012 at 5:51 PM
Thank you sweetheart!!! hugs
Dey Avatar
May 6, 2012 at 6:22 AM
Really awesome.
Ink-U-Script Avatar
May 6, 2012 at 7:07 AM
Wow, Thanks for stopping by...you are the KING of love poems..lol
Williams Avatar
May 6, 2012 at 3:17 AM
Pace, cool words, I like it..david
Ink-U-Script Avatar
May 6, 2012 at 5:58 AM
Thank you a lot David!!
Dietrich Avatar
May 5, 2012 at 8:38 PM
wow, now I see why you are called Ink-U-script . THat was awesome!!
Ink-U-Script Avatar
May 5, 2012 at 10:44 PM
Lol..thank you so much..that meant a lot coming from you...hugs
Devnath  Avatar
May 5, 2012 at 8:44 AM
Really loved much and much because is no because....., You are Father's real son, I do feel from your words. Loved always.......................................................,bl
Ink-U-Script Avatar
May 5, 2012 at 9:44 AM
I actually needed to hear that from you..was on the verge of giving up for a second or two for the simple fact that so much is going on within the soup.
Onclaud Avatar
May 4, 2012 at 3:21 AM
what a creative piece with words that light my day,pace...greatt visuals!..:) hugggs!
Ink-U-Script Avatar
May 4, 2012 at 4:07 AM
Aww..I'm glad that I could do that for you..Hugs!!!
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