Love

You surround me by the words of your heart,
and warm me up by the heat of your hands
but who knows the end of this beautiful art,
will appear and fade on this wonder land.


How could this be, an ever-fixed mark
that always stick deep down into my mind?
My heart broke down and sank into the dark,
I never knew you were always behind.

Just now i admit that i fell in love,
But i never knew of what would happen.
and the friendship that we together wove
is the torn of disappointment taken.

love is sweet but it'll merciless by time,
but sometime love is permanent in mime.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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June 30, 2011 at 7:50 AM
I enjoyed reading your poetry this morning Phuc. I will be back again soon to read more. Hoping you find your soul filled with inspiration today and everyday and may your writing endeavors come to be. Love, Carol
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