Love

My thoughts flow your way 
More often than not

Sometimes when  I 
Watch you walk away

I think to myself 
You might never return 

Then what would I do
I'd be lost without you

When I am in your arms
It seems like the whole 
The world goes away

I love you 
That's all I know
That's all I want to know

devotiondramatic monologue

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Khallico Poe

December 16, 2017 at 5:00 AM

Good one.

Duke Beaufort

April 23, 2017 at 7:38 AM

How sweet you are and true in your love. There cannot be a purer expression. You do this so well, and I am sorry your heart was broken at some point. However, what happens brings us to a new understanding and place. It helps us understand what others go through. It's a bit like traveling to a poor country except that they can have the love we lost and that can make us feel our loss even more.

John Loving Iii

February 18, 2013 at 10:28 PM

That's all I wanna know. I would put it.

Debbie Duncan

February 18, 2013 at 11:13 PM

Thank you John.

Sukmawati Komala

August 26, 2012 at 10:12 PM

lovely write..i enjoy this much Debbie..:) have a lovely days:)luv and hug SK

Anne-Lise Andresen

July 30, 2012 at 1:21 PM

I love to read sweet and romantic love poem Debbie - this one are well written !!!! - oxox Anne-Lise :)

Debbie Duncan

July 30, 2012 at 2:10 PM

Thank you Anne - Lise ;} you have a blessed day ;}

Sarah Seraphin

December 6, 2011 at 9:23 PM

* "I LOVE THE LOVE I FIND INSIDE THESE SOULFUL WORDS OF SUCH BEAUTY * MY DEAR SWEET BEAUTIFUL * PRECIOUS DEBBIE * 'TIS ALL I WANT TO DO' * OWWW HOW I CAN ECHO THOSE BEAUTIFUL EMOTIONS OF HEART SOOOO VERY DEEEEPLY * I AM GOING TO FAVOURITE AS I FAVOUR YOUR BEAUTIFUL SELF * THANK YOU * TWAS A JOY TO BEHOLD YOUR BEAUTY AGAIN * MY LUV, FOREVER & ALWAYS * SARAH." *

Debbie Duncan

December 11, 2011 at 11:15 PM

Hello sarah,, I hope this day finds you happy and loved my sweet friend ;}

Robert A. Dufresne

June 19, 2011 at 6:24 AM

I love the simplicity of this poem. Debbie. I wish more were like it. I believe you have inspired me to do one of my own in the future.. not into the mushy gushy stuff .... just not my kinda thing like it is for many others. great poem. Thanks for your encouraging comment

Debbie Duncan

September 5, 2011 at 9:05 PM

thank you ;} I believe in us too !

James Foulk

June 15, 2011 at 2:02 PM

very romantic and so tender and warm.

Debbie Duncan

December 11, 2011 at 11:43 PM

thank you James ;}

Don Johnson

June 14, 2011 at 1:37 AM

when love flows an so enthralled, we hang on every word, but time it has you maybe blackballed, worry has the love time blurred without a feather to fly:) great love verse babe, xo, Don

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

June 13, 2011 at 8:17 AM

sweetly romantic and intensely emotional piece Debbie.. enjoyed and thankxx for your sweet comments on my body of work luv..

Debbie Duncan

December 11, 2011 at 11:44 PM

thank you Linda ;} have a sweet day !

Crystal Wilkins

June 12, 2011 at 2:19 AM

a sweet poem, love is always filled with uncertainty and if its meant to be all the doubts in the world will be worth it, a lovely write, i look forward to reading more of your work

Debbie Duncan

June 13, 2011 at 2:05 AM

thank you for reading my words on Love ;} Debbie

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