Love

Love is a mysterious thing, you never know what it will bring. The way love makes your heart skip, to the way your stomach flips. Love is a precious key, that belongs to only me. I choose what hearts to unlock, and which hearts to block. Love is a scary thing, taking a chance, will make you dance. Opening up your heart, is a good way to start! Love is a beautiful and magical gift, keep it close to you and treasure it. Cory Long 6-9-2011 Sonnets, sonnets, everywhere contest

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Robin Davis

Date: 11/11/2013 8:28:00 AM

Cory this is a sweet and loving write. I can feel the devotion and dedication coming from your heart. Nice job

Francine Roberts

Date: 6/16/2011 6:33:00 PM

Cory I just wanted to thank you for entering my contest, I did not place your poem , competition was very tough, but I wanted you to know that I thought it was really really good, especially for a first attempt at a sonnet, Please continue to expand into forms that are new to you ,you have a lot of talent to share

Kylie Korfmann

Date: 6/12/2011 5:22:00 PM

Very Nice Poem about Love, I enjoyed it very much -Kylie

Francine Roberts

Date: 6/9/2011 11:11:00 AM

Cory it isn't showing up as entered, please check and re-enter, thanks

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 6/9/2011 9:39:00 AM

well Luv is my favorite subject cory and u have touched on all facets of this grand emotion my friend.. a lovely write indeed.. special words..

Francine Roberts

Date: 6/9/2011 9:27:00 AM

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