Love

In you, as on a tree I'll climb, over your shoulders as small as I am, I'll kiss the sun.

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Stephan McBride

Date: 3/13/2011 9:46:00 AM

what a creative picture of love, great work

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 1/24/2011 6:50:00 PM

love can make you feel that big:), cute and lovley write, enjoyed your write,..p.d.

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 1/17/2011 12:28:00 PM

I am stopping by today to thank you for your kind comments Mirela. It is always a pleasure to read your wonderful poetry. Love, Carol

Sara Kendrick

Date: 1/15/2011 9:47:00 AM

That is a really tall person or one held high in your esteem..Great work..I am glad that I chose this one to read this morn..You are a felicitator of happiness when you give my work your kind reviews..Sara

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 1/15/2011 8:28:00 AM

This has such a lovely, uplifting image, Mirela. Very nice! Love, Carolyn

Fabiyas M V

Date: 1/15/2011 8:12:00 AM

It is a rose bloomed on inner plant,friend.Thanks for congrats.Same to you for big win.

Bozhidar Pangelov

Date: 1/15/2011 12:45:00 AM

A little sad that I read contemporary Albanian writer for the first time. But the pleasure is mine. Let there be love.

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 1/14/2011 11:10:00 AM

I am so happy to feel good enough to be reading poetry today. It was a pleasure to read your excellent write Mirela. Love, Carol