Love

LIFE    without life there would be no love
            love is the breath we take 
            the steps we make 
            the understanding in all mistakes
            that heart break that heal
            that cool feeling that chill
            that sweat that tear  
            that pain that fear
            that wonderful feeling when you are near


0PINIONATED  as love could be 
                        a perfect example of you and me 
                        through out all the pain you still love me 
                        strong as the roots on a tree


A VISION          even a blind man can see
                        a lost of breath everytime your heart beat
                         the numbness in your body
                        the tingle in your feet a

everlasting      feeling a wonderful treat
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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December 18, 2010 at 9:37 AM
Very creative Allen... Lay
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