Love

Love Seasons Character Sea of motions Dance Four Kingdoms Hearts alive One Family Life. By CarolineCécile Copyright © 11.25.09 N.B.: Four Kingdoms to represent four types of heart: Parental, Conjugal, filial piety (children’s love) and fraternal love. My first try at this form, inspired by Brian Strand.

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David Byrne

Date: 4/18/2010 11:40:00 PM

yes we are all one family: living things that is.......smile!

Richard Pickett

Date: 12/2/2009 7:16:00 PM

Very nice the Lantern is one of my favorites to write... Well done...RdP

Prince Freakasso

Date: 12/1/2009 3:26:00 AM

Ah,Ah,Caroline.A poetry book a glass of wine,and comments as beautiful as thine.I was pulling the lords leg when I said (Slave).Was he not but save but one,who despite being so wise and tall said,"to be the greatest, be the servant of all".God Bless....PRINCE

John Freeman

Date: 11/28/2009 11:23:00 AM

Thankfully, death does not have the final word, but love does, as all will bend the knee, unto this awesome power of the now, which will change, natural death into paranormal, life. Smile, Sincerely, love, Moses

James Fraser

Date: 11/28/2009 10:58:00 AM

Caroline, for a first time write on this form, its a gold start for you. Lovely piece >> James

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 11/26/2009 9:35:00 PM

Your words are so true and if we all could commit them to memory they would remind us to love each other especially family our world would be a better place.. wonderful write .. thankxxx for sharing tonight... luv.

Colleen Bono

Date: 11/26/2009 4:46:00 PM

I wrote a new poem called Life is to Short.Check it out tell me what you think.

Brian Strand

Date: 11/25/2009 11:49:00 PM

Let yours flow through your pen Caroline.Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments & kind words today.

Sara Kendrick

Date: 11/25/2009 2:20:00 PM

Interesting thoughts put to pen. Keep the magical pen flowing. Sara

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 11/25/2009 12:39:00 PM

Although I am not familiar with the form inspired by Brian, your words bring readers' "Hearts alive." There are indeed many types of love. Very nice writing, Caroline. Happy Thanksgiving, Carolyn