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Love The love that I had went into dust, I just knew I was going to bust. I told one thing I promised I wouldn't tell and now my life is a living hell. The man of my dreams went away, and now my heart is a big hole of pain. In just a week I ruined my life, and just think i thought I was going to be his wife. Well I'm not and i don't know what else to do, I give up in life and now my heart feels like goo. The man of my dreams is now gone, and all i got is our favorite song. Love can hurt you when you lose it, so be careful in what you do because instead of this being me, this could be you.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 11/17/2009 12:10:00 PM
Wow. very heart felt. Great work(:
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Date: 11/11/2009 9:12:00 AM
I to know how this feels Jessica and I am sorry that the pain of heartbreak has consumed another person. I know that you will find someone better who will treat you the way you deserve to be treated. All in all a very good write and I expect to see some great poems from you... Goodluck, Robert... :)
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