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The sun starts it's day peeking over the blue horizon,
bright lights will shine on the blue sea.
What a way to welcome another a new day,
cool air surrounding you like a warm blanket.
As I walk,
light blue water kisses the sandy shore.
Pretty shells are everywhere,
as the birds scamper for breakfast.
I loved my many days at the beach,
now just a fond memory.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2023




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Date: 11/28/2023 3:17:00 PM
you made the beach sound so lovely, Paula...and what great memories. I never spent much time at the beach...I do vividly remember all the pretty shells and the waves washing up against the shore...and, of course, the smell. Thanks for bringing that memory to life. Have a splendid evening, Sara
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 11/29/2023 7:10:00 AM
Good to see you. Glad you like my fun "Love" beach/sea write. Yes, the smell of the salt in the air. Health/heavenly. I really miss those fun days. The great memories will last forever. Have a great/wonderful day writing away..........................
Date: 11/28/2023 11:30:00 AM
Another lovely poem.. you have posted some great poems today.
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 11/29/2023 7:04:00 AM
Good to see you. Thanks for your note and for your kind words. Glad you enjoyed my fun "Love"  beach/sea write. Have a great/wonderful day writing away..........................
Date: 11/28/2023 6:57:00 AM
Ah I absolutely love the imagery in this. So soul warming and stunning, especially love the lines “ light blue water kisses the sandy shore.“ and “ as the birds scamper for breakfast.“ gorgeous! Lovely scenery, pleasure reading this. Goodluck with the contest
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 11/29/2023 7:01:00 AM
Good to see you. Thanks for your note and for your Good Luck. Glad you love my imagery/lines in my beach/sea write. I miss those days. Have a great/wonderful day writing away..........................
Date: 11/28/2023 6:30:00 AM
Love~Date Written:11/28/2023
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