Love

An old man sitting besides me lost in his own thoughts 
About how his life would end 
He looked dull and waiting for his death
No one would believe this old flower was once the  brightest
Looking like as if he was never something else from this before 
 I thought and thought and I took a deep breath
And thought ohh lord why cannot be everyone same forever why for some end is near shore
Maturity is what gets into you and what you take inside
Ohh Lord why someone once a king now has every feeling which he wants to hide
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Agustin Avatar
October 24, 2023 at 5:18 AM
Welcome to Poetry Soup. I welcome you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
Ariba Avatar
October 21, 2023 at 12:42 PM
That was very sweet and heart touching poem keep up the good work young boy and find more ways to improve you can really do wonders
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October 21, 2023 at 12:43 PM
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