Love

If love is love, then what kind of love exactly is love? Perhaps a word, spoken bright Or a whisper soft in light Maybe a touch when gripped in fright. Does love move and sway like the wind? Perhaps one swing and then a slide Or a sidestep keeping narrow or wide Maybe a retreat when it’s time to hide . Can love be measured in loving quantities? Perhaps to be immersed and deep Or a submission of peace to keep Maybe a weight of forever sleep If love is love, there is only love.

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Karen Jones

Date: 10/9/2023 6:22:00 PM

Deep and inquisitive. I like it.

Christina Bowring

Date: 10/9/2023 3:31:00 PM

Such a lovely, well written poem Janine. Thought provoking. I love the line,’Or a whisper soft in light’ and the last two lines in particular. You pose some interesting questions. Really enjoyed reading it. Thank you for sharing. :)

Janine Lever
Date: 10/9/2023 3:50:00 PM

Hello and thank you Christina for your comments. Good to meet you.xx