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Love

There’s not enough words to explain, This feeling I get with you is compatibly insane. Three words put together can say, Only part of this depth boiling to the tip of my tongue to say. I love you, and never will be the same, If u decided to walk away and leave me cold and astray. I trust you with my life, and for only you to see. Is something more than reality, more like a fantasy. Fate is what brought us together and ending this I say. Forever I am yours until my last day.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 8/10/2009 8:18:00 PM
totally true and loving the words! great write. best wishes....
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Date: 6/4/2009 11:43:00 AM
i luved it
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Date: 5/26/2009 6:26:00 PM
Amazing! Beautiful write indeed! - jeremiah
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Date: 5/17/2009 10:24:00 PM
truly an amazing poem...very well crafted!...Luke
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Date: 5/17/2009 5:00:00 PM
What a beautiful love poem! I love this!
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Date: 5/17/2009 3:15:00 PM
FYI - the story of "Alister Bridle" is a true one.
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Date: 5/17/2009 2:55:00 PM
What a devout profession of enduring live, Elizabeth! The type of "trust" you describe only comes when we are truly in love, and I'm happy you have someone who inspires you this way. Love, Carolyn
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