Love

There’s not enough words to explain,

This feeling I get with you is compatibly insane.

Three words put together can say,

Only part of this depth boiling to the tip of my tongue to say.
 
I love you, and never will be the same,

If u decided to walk away and leave me cold and astray.

I trust you with my life, and for only you to see.

Is something more than reality, more like a fantasy. 

Fate is what brought us together and ending this I say.

Forever I  am yours until my last day.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Norvell Avatar
August 10, 2009 at 8:18 PM
totally true and loving the words! great write. best wishes....
Eckiwaudah Avatar
June 4, 2009 at 11:43 AM
i luved it
Orozco Avatar
May 26, 2009 at 6:26 PM
Amazing! Beautiful write indeed! - jeremiah
Steadman Avatar
May 17, 2009 at 10:24 PM
truly an amazing poem...very well crafted!...Luke
D Avatar
May 17, 2009 at 5:00 PM
What a beautiful love poem! I love this!
Devonshire Avatar
May 17, 2009 at 3:15 PM
FYI - the story of "Alister Bridle" is a true one.
Devonshire Avatar
May 17, 2009 at 2:55 PM
What a devout profession of enduring live, Elizabeth! The type of "trust" you describe only comes when we are truly in love, and I'm happy you have someone who inspires you this way. Love, Carolyn
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