Love

love wears a noose
_balancing delicately
on an old broken chair

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Kat Crane

April 17, 2009 at 12:08 PM

I may need to borrow your chair, mine's also broken

Charlene Bird

April 16, 2009 at 10:52 PM

A masterful, powerful verse indeed!

Tyesha Ehigiator

March 12, 2009 at 11:54 PM

Wow, this is deep..Congratulations on having this awesome piece being featured this week..GB Tyesha

Fathima Dawood

March 12, 2009 at 4:57 AM

Well said Brian!!! Congratulations on your excellent poetry being featured this week!! Peace Fathima

Carol Sunshine Brown

March 11, 2009 at 2:59 PM

Congratulations on your excellent poetry being featured this week Brian. Love, Carol

Vince Suzadail Jr.

March 11, 2009 at 11:27 AM

Congratulations Brian on the featuring of "Love" on Poetry Soup this week. Vince

Maryam Jameela Haniff

March 10, 2009 at 3:18 PM

such words of truth you speak...enjoyed this short piece.congrats on its feature..MJ*

Trudy Diane Rider

March 10, 2009 at 11:42 AM

Great visual here! Congratulations on being featured! ~Trudy ~

Daver Austin

March 10, 2009 at 10:25 AM

Congrats on this selection...a very lucid observation. Love, daver

Barbara Gorelick

March 9, 2009 at 7:35 PM

Brian, this is a great one..it speaks to me. Congrats om being featured. I'm going to read all your work..dont know how I missed this. BG

March 9, 2009 at 5:48 PM

Interesting images carry your thoughts in a creative way. Much said in just three lines. Congratulations on having your poem featured. I wish you continued success with your writing. Karen