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She told me, please be kind to me. Beautiful Sheena had a kind heart, a true heart. She whispered please drink of me, make me feel, I am the only one. I taught her, pretty words can be pretty lies. ................................................................................................ The blushing rose, is sun-kissed by the sun. When the shade of love make us believe, we are adored and beckon us to be fearless and brave. Do we show real face, lull in the breathe of love without caution? Shall we be a thief or lovers, the poet asked the raising sun? ................................................................................................. I loved the weeping willow, her faithful heart made her believe, love would save her. Love did teach her. The sweetest kiss turn to the taste of vinegar. Dancing Coyote

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Date: 10/30/2020 8:51:00 AM
Great poetic masterpiece John, your creativity is in top form and the outcome is breathtaking. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.
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John Castellenas
Date: 10/31/2020 2:10:00 AM
Thank you dear Jennifer. I appreciate the kind words.
Date: 10/30/2020 6:30:00 AM
This is so poetic.. Loved it..
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John Castellenas
Date: 10/31/2020 2:10:00 AM
Thank you for reading and the comment. I do appreciate.
Date: 10/12/2020 1:09:00 PM
pretty words can be pretty lies. For that, I was not surprised by the ending. I enjoyed this one MUCHO.
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John Castellenas
Date: 10/13/2020 3:10:00 AM
Thank you dear Andrea. It is sad we learn the karma of love is fair. We will pay three-fold for breaking of a kind heart.
Date: 10/6/2020 2:30:00 PM
I really like the way you penned this, John. The twist at end was excellent! ~Angie
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John Castellenas
Date: 10/8/2020 10:23:00 PM
Thank you dear Angela. Love can be bitter-sweet.

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