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Love

Over used simplicity
no matter how true
yet here I am
running through the rain forests
chasing demons in the breeze
I wish to capture one and all
banish them all to the devils hell
so that when I wake up this very next day
all my friends can come out and play
no more pain
virus or flu
no anxiety or fear of the past
only fresh air
A day at a time
we all count this way
I am just thankful
when I make angels laugh!
					wiping tears away


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Over used simplicity
no matter how true
yet here I am
running through the rainforest
chasing demons in the breeze
I wish to capture one and all
banish them all to the devils hell
so that when I wake from where ever fallen
all my friends can come out and play
friends and inner child can dance on clouds
no more pain
maladies or grip
no anxiety or fear of the past
only fresh air
A day at a time
we all count this way
I am just thankful
when I make angels laugh!
					wiping tears away
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Nance Avatar
June 16, 2018 at 6:20 PM
visual ... good... :) hugs
Salehi Avatar
June 9, 2018 at 1:51 PM
How beautiful...
Devonshire Avatar
June 5, 2018 at 2:59 PM
Through your words, I can see you clearly as the rain forest warrior trying to banish the demons. Oh, what it would be like to have a word without pain, fear or anxiety! May your Utopian dreams bless us all. Beautifully written, Arthur! Hugs, Carolyn
Callus Avatar
June 5, 2018 at 2:54 PM
Perhaps an Utopia is still a possibility, Arthur! Best regards // paul
Smith Avatar
June 5, 2018 at 2:44 PM
Simply beautiful
Onclaud Avatar
June 5, 2018 at 2:06 PM
ohh, the perfect way to relish life so endearing in its delightful poetic sway, arthur... you are my angel today!..huggs
Pigeon Tart Avatar
June 5, 2018 at 8:15 AM
Wonderful, smile inducing <3
Michael Avatar
June 5, 2018 at 4:55 AM
I've got a powerful net ... let's go catch these demons... Nice vibes here...All the best Arthur
Allison Avatar
June 5, 2018 at 3:22 AM
you make me smile Arthur:-) hugs jan xx
Ella Avatar
June 5, 2018 at 12:53 AM
You have a beautiful poem and it matches your heart <3 :)
White Avatar
June 5, 2018 at 12:12 AM
Well, you made ME laugh alright. LOVE your poem, my friend :)
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