Get Your Premium Membership

Love

Poet's Notes
(Show)

Become a Premium Member and post notes and photos about your poem like Arthur Vaso.


Over used simplicity no matter how true yet here I am running through the rain forests chasing demons in the breeze I wish to capture one and all banish them all to the devils hell so that when I wake up this very next day all my friends can come out and play no more pain virus or flu no anxiety or fear of the past only fresh air A day at a time we all count this way I am just thankful when I make angels laugh! wiping tears away edit version Over used simplicity no matter how true yet here I am running through the rainforest chasing demons in the breeze I wish to capture one and all banish them all to the devils hell so that when I wake from where ever fallen all my friends can come out and play friends and inner child can dance on clouds no more pain maladies or grip no anxiety or fear of the past only fresh air A day at a time we all count this way I am just thankful when I make angels laugh! wiping tears away

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018




Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem.

Please Login to post a comment

Date: 6/16/2018 6:20:00 PM
visual ... good... :) hugs
Login to Reply
Date: 6/9/2018 1:51:00 PM
How beautiful...
Login to Reply
Date: 6/5/2018 2:59:00 PM
Through your words, I can see you clearly as the rain forest warrior trying to banish the demons. Oh, what it would be like to have a word without pain, fear or anxiety! May your Utopian dreams bless us all. Beautifully written, Arthur! Hugs, Carolyn
Login to Reply
Date: 6/5/2018 2:54:00 PM
Perhaps an Utopia is still a possibility, Arthur! Best regards // paul
Login to Reply
Date: 6/5/2018 2:44:00 PM
Simply beautiful
Login to Reply
Date: 6/5/2018 2:06:00 PM
ohh, the perfect way to relish life so endearing in its delightful poetic sway, arthur... you are my angel today!..huggs
Login to Reply
Date: 6/5/2018 8:15:00 AM
Wonderful, smile inducing <3
Login to Reply
Date: 6/5/2018 4:55:00 AM
I've got a powerful net ... let's go catch these demons... Nice vibes here...All the best Arthur
Login to Reply
Date: 6/5/2018 3:22:00 AM
you make me smile Arthur:-) hugs jan xx
Login to Reply
Date: 6/5/2018 12:53:00 AM
You have a beautiful poem and it matches your heart <3 :)
Login to Reply
Date: 6/5/2018 12:12:00 AM
Well, you made ME laugh alright. LOVE your poem, my friend :)
Login to Reply

Book: Shattered Sighs