Love

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To watch you from afar Yet touch you so near Wishing you were so close Gently whispering I love you Catch my eye I’m looking at you, discreetly Tease me and I will follow Until you stare in my eyes Then follow me in to my arms Saying I’ve fallen for you Where do we go from here?

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Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 6/10/2018 6:36:00 PM

HelloTharia,nice to meet you. your poem is beautifully written. have a nice evening my friend.

Jan Allison

Date: 5/1/2018 1:24:00 PM

aww this is so lovely Tahira ... and who know where these fantasies will take us:-) love the picture too you are so creative:-) hugs jan xx

Tahira Parveen
Date: 5/2/2018 11:53:00 AM

Thank you Jan for you lovely comment:)

Paul Callus

Date: 4/29/2018 4:32:00 PM

Ah! That's the advantage of fantasy, Tahira! One can daydream without fear of repercussions. Where do we go from here.....back to reality:) ~ Best regards // paul

Tahira Parveen
Date: 4/30/2018 7:06:00 AM

lol, Paul. So true:)

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 4/29/2018 1:23:00 PM

- .... no one knows :) - A lovely poem, Tahira :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Tahira Parveen
Date: 4/29/2018 3:34:00 PM

Thank you for your lovely comment Sunshine Smile:) who knows!