Get Your Premium Membership

Lounging Outside

lounging outside the nightbeams reflect pictures of us--- about remembered dreams flanked between warmth and pain Tanka 2 Contest 20 March 2015

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem.

Please Login to post a comment

Date: 3/22/2015 1:56:00 PM
ASHLEY, Congratulations on your awesome TANKA 2 win Always & Forever <3 Luv ~LINDA~
Login to Reply
Date: 3/21/2015 9:23:00 PM
I like how you kept to the modern approach with this one, not using capitalization and keeping to shorter lines of syllable count. Congrats for your win.
Login to Reply

Book: Shattered Sighs