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Loud and Clear

In the silence of the still dark night the moonbeam's glow speaks out to me bringing to light what was lost in translation there is hope where there was only despair promise when all was thought lost breath when I was gasping for air I wonder if the moonbeams are shining down on you whispering out my name comforting you in the night showing you the light In the silence of the still dark night caressing all my fears I hear you loud and clear

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 7/29/2015 11:58:00 AM
Gentle thoughts in these charming lines, Tim. Kim
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Date: 7/28/2015 12:56:00 PM
Love remains intangible and ethereal in its composition as it flickers in and out of our dreams on a moonbeam. Very well put with easy flow rhythm. Emile.
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Date: 7/27/2015 1:33:00 AM
Oh those moonbeams shine their light to each corner of the world..Im sure they brought comfort to her..Such a beauty!
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Date: 7/23/2015 11:45:00 PM
tim, I am afraid to see the other free verse in case it is in MY contest. I should have made people use a certain title. I will never know now if I am seeing one in my contest or not!! yes, Utah's state bird is so interesting. I just put the pictures up with that string of limericks. Go check them out. This is the gorgeous view I have every day from my house!
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Date: 7/23/2015 11:37:00 AM
Always the romantic... and it works. It draws us in every time.
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Date: 7/23/2015 11:04:00 AM
An etheric and romantic poem that even the night would fall in love, dear Tim.
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Date: 7/23/2015 1:44:00 AM
Excellent. Beautiful imagery write. Enjoyed reading it. TFS
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Date: 7/22/2015 11:55:00 PM
I like how there were rhymes in it even though it is free verse. It's so lovely!!
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Date: 7/22/2015 4:36:00 PM
Lol!!!! This is extremely excellent, I enjoyed the read..........A.M.
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Date: 7/22/2015 4:19:00 PM
aww Tim this is so beautiful the imagery is wonderful:-) hugs Jan xx
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