Kim Rodrigues Poet Free verse

Loud

L O U D

that’s  M E

loneliness flickers on the tv screen

I may be  L O U D

but I sniffle mostly on my own sleeve

M A N N E R S   taught me

to wait for what crumbs fall

so I treat myself to

I S O L A T I O N

until I see  R E D

then I explode

most unpleasantly

my sleeve shakes all over the place

and loudly I  B A W L

unhappily

1/3/2019

MY LOUDEST FEELINGS/Sponsor - Caren Krutsinger

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Carole Duet January 7, 2019 at 5:17 PM Congrats on your win, Kim, for your honest LOUD poem. lol Carole :D Kim Rodrigues January 7, 2019 at 5:17 PM Thank you, Carole!

Andrea Dietrich January 6, 2019 at 4:46 PM congratulations, I rarely explode but even then, it's a kind of controlled explosion. haha. Love how you really SHOWED your loudest feeling. Congrats Kim Rodrigues January 6, 2019 at 8:52 PM Thank you, Andrea!

Connie Marcum Wong January 5, 2019 at 9:57 PM Congratulations on your first place win Kim! : ) xxoo Kim Rodrigues January 5, 2019 at 10:12 PM Thank you!

Line Gauthier January 5, 2019 at 6:18 PM Congrats on your top win, Kim. Well done. Kim Rodrigues January 5, 2019 at 6:21 PM Thank you, Line!

D.H. Alderose January 5, 2019 at 11:30 AM Absolutely beautiful. I can't say anything else - well done and a well deserved congrats. Kim Rodrigues January 5, 2019 at 6:20 PM Thank you, D.H.!

Eve Roper January 5, 2019 at 10:11 AM Kim, I wish people would have more manners, but I think that part of education is been long forgotten. Congratulations on your 1st place win my dear.. Hugs Eve ~`* Kim Rodrigues January 5, 2019 at 10:13 AM I know what you mean but I guess they’ve always been around...it’s just gotten worse!