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L O U D that’s M E loneliness flickers on the tv screen I may be L O U D but I sniffle mostly on my own sleeve M A N N E R S taught me to wait for what crumbs fall so I treat myself to I S O L A T I O N until I see R E D then I explode most unpleasantly my sleeve shakes all over the place and loudly I B A W L unhappily 1/3/2019 MY LOUDEST FEELINGS/Sponsor - Caren Krutsinger

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Date: 1/7/2019 5:17:00 PM
Congrats on your win, Kim, for your honest LOUD poem. lol Carole :D
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/7/2019 5:17:00 PM
Thank you, Carole!
Date: 1/6/2019 4:46:00 PM
congratulations, I rarely explode but even then, it's a kind of controlled explosion. haha. Love how you really SHOWED your loudest feeling. Congrats
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/6/2019 8:52:00 PM
Thank you, Andrea!
Date: 1/5/2019 9:57:00 PM
Congratulations on your first place win Kim! : ) xxoo
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/5/2019 10:12:00 PM
Thank you!
Date: 1/5/2019 6:18:00 PM
Congrats on your top win, Kim. Well done.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/5/2019 6:21:00 PM
Thank you, Line!
Date: 1/5/2019 11:30:00 AM
Absolutely beautiful. I can't say anything else - well done and a well deserved congrats.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/5/2019 6:20:00 PM
Thank you, D.H.!
Date: 1/5/2019 10:11:00 AM
Kim, I wish people would have more manners, but I think that part of education is been long forgotten. Congratulations on your 1st place win my dear.. Hugs Eve ~`*
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/5/2019 10:13:00 AM
I know what you mean but I guess they’ve always been around...it’s just gotten worse!

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