Lotus Flower

Flower of lotus
    Soft neath cumulus
        Peaceful vision thus
Within radius
    Hear the angelus
        Wish of nautilus
Dream of Pegasus
    Spur my animus
        Flutter stimulus
Teasing up a fuss
    Perfumed omnibus
        What should we discuss
The kinship that’s us
    Affinity plus
        Equilibrious 



AP: Honorable Mention 2021

Submitted on February 1, 2019 for STANDARD CONTEST 170 sponsored by BRIAN STRAND  -  RANKED 1ST
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Rodrigues Avatar
June 7, 2019 at 10:06 PM
Love this! Very cool!
Gauthier Avatar
June 7, 2019 at 10:39 PM
Thanks for your much appreciated visit and compliment, Kim.
Carber Avatar
February 5, 2019 at 9:11 AM
Oh Line, you are a genius when it comes to word play-- wish I could get my words to dance like that! Congrats on your win in Brian's contest.
Gauthier Avatar
February 5, 2019 at 1:51 PM
O LJ, you are way too kind. Thank you so much.
Roper Avatar
February 2, 2019 at 8:39 PM
Love the verse, Line,I enjoyed reading :) . Congratulations on your win..Hugs Eve ~`*
Gauthier Avatar
February 2, 2019 at 9:16 PM
Thank you so much, Eve.
Krutsinger Avatar
April 8, 2018 at 8:35 AM
You not only lived up to expectation, but you soared with these words into the heavens, Line.
Gauthier Avatar
April 8, 2018 at 10:14 AM
Thank you so much, Caren. Most appreciated.
Canerdy Avatar
April 8, 2018 at 7:38 AM
Lovely and descriptive, Line! Janice
Gauthier Avatar
April 8, 2018 at 8:04 AM
Thanks for your visit and comment, Janice.
Roper Avatar
April 8, 2018 at 12:15 AM
Wonderful write, Line.
Gauthier Avatar
April 8, 2018 at 7:32 AM
Thank you, Eve. Much appreciated visit and comment.
Downing  Avatar
April 7, 2018 at 11:20 PM
Flowingly beautiful, Line! Hugs :)
Gauthier Avatar
April 7, 2018 at 11:38 PM
Thank you, Akkina. Most appreciated.
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