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Lotus Divine

Lotus rising out of murky waters illuminated by the rays of sun that fall upon the flower in glorious pastel tints I am reminded of the simplicity of beauty the kind that takes my breath away and leaves me with a reverent soul that aspires to transmutation of banal existence Lotus at home in pond of still waters resting upon outer rimless edges of time immemorial living beauty that shines forevermore I know that a pure heart is a wise heart made wiser by looking within one's soul for truth and then contemplation the quiet sitting abiding watching the breath move in and out wakefulness in the midst of the world catastrophe keeping the eyes open the ears open and moving forward in the steady rhythms that nature allows.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008




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Date: 12/1/2008 11:33:00 AM
Hello Leslie; so much eastern symbolism surrounds the lotus, so beautiful flower, its own mantra, its own mandala.. I enjoyed the flow in this poem and think it is well written.. I only have one point.. and it is not about the poem itself.. banal existence ? I know it is described as such by Buddhists.. I never agreed.. existence is not banal, it is "everything".. our interpretations of it may be banal.. but existence is why we are here.. just my thought.. not meant as a criticism of your work
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