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oops dear poetess you were too drunk to notice my lovely lotus Yay, I did it! The challenge was to write a rhymed iambic haiku. Here it is)

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Date: 5/2/2020 11:31:00 PM
Kurt, The lotus is still remembered. -Richard
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Date: 1/18/2020 12:23:00 AM
My name on this site is Lotus Kurt, so I had to giggle. Very good! xxoo
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Date: 1/4/2020 9:07:00 AM
It appears you did. Well done poetic one!
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Date: 1/3/2020 11:40:00 PM
Kurt, The lotus will be remembered. Well done. -Richard
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Date: 12/19/2019 7:42:00 PM
Not sure if it is completely iambic but it's a REALLY COOL KU!!
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Date: 12/15/2019 7:50:00 PM
Splendid! Love the rhymes, esp. 'notice.' ~ Gershonovich
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Kurt Ravidas
Date: 12/20/2019 6:17:00 AM
Thanks, Wolf)
Date: 12/14/2019 10:28:00 PM
Yep, you certainly did. Now all you have to do is add an 'o' on the first to in the second line and it's a wrap. Very nice, Kurt. My hat is off to ya.
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Lin Lane
Date: 12/15/2019 4:49:00 AM
Thank you on both counts. This little rhyming iambus was a fun adventure. Thanks for driving us there.
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Kurt Ravidas
Date: 12/15/2019 4:07:00 AM
Ooops, lost one. Thank you, Lin. I see you're not only a great poet, but also a good source of inspiration)
Date: 12/14/2019 9:11:00 PM
fun challenge. fun execution. Bravo, Kurt.
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Kurt Ravidas
Date: 12/15/2019 4:07:00 AM
Thank you, Line)