Lotus

oops dear poetess you were too drunk to notice my lovely lotus Yay, I did it! The challenge was to write a rhymed iambic haiku. Here it is)

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Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 12/8/2020 12:13:00 PM

I miss you dear friend. Please come back. Blessings xxoo

Quoth Theraven

Date: 5/2/2020 11:31:00 PM

Kurt, The lotus is still remembered. -Richard

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 1/18/2020 12:23:00 AM

My name on this site is Lotus Kurt, so I had to giggle. Very good! xxoo

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 1/4/2020 9:07:00 AM

It appears you did. Well done poetic one!

Quoth Theraven

Date: 1/3/2020 11:40:00 PM

Kurt, The lotus will be remembered. Well done. -Richard

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/19/2019 7:42:00 PM

Not sure if it is completely iambic but it's a REALLY COOL KU!!

Gershon Wolf

Date: 12/15/2019 7:50:00 PM

Splendid! Love the rhymes, esp. 'notice.' ~ Gershonovich

Kurt Ravidas
Date: 12/20/2019 6:17:00 AM

Thanks, Wolf)

Lin Lane

Date: 12/14/2019 10:28:00 PM

Yep, you certainly did. Now all you have to do is add an 'o' on the first to in the second line and it's a wrap. Very nice, Kurt. My hat is off to ya.

Lin Lane
Date: 12/15/2019 4:49:00 AM

Thank you on both counts. This little rhyming iambus was a fun adventure. Thanks for driving us there.

Kurt Ravidas
Date: 12/15/2019 4:07:00 AM

Ooops, lost one. Thank you, Lin. I see you're not only a great poet, but also a good source of inspiration)

Line Gauthier

Date: 12/14/2019 9:11:00 PM

fun challenge. fun execution. Bravo, Kurt.

Kurt Ravidas
Date: 12/15/2019 4:07:00 AM

Thank you, Line)