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Lots of Bottles

A million plus blue bottles washed up upon a shore Each and every one with still a sting in it's tentacles And gasping for air And along for the ride rode a single blue bottle with a message inside Forewarning of the danger of bottling thing's up For fear of being told by other's to shut up

Copyright © | Year Posted 2021




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Date: 2/7/2021 11:26:00 AM
Come on Christopher don’t bottle up anything, get it out there, hurts to much to keep inside, unleashing your thoughts into a poem, is so cathartic, cheers David
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David Kavanagh
Date: 2/7/2021 1:09:00 PM
I understand Christopher in your own time cheers
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Christopher Flaherty
Date: 2/7/2021 12:15:00 PM
Honestly struggling and trying to make sense my mate of everything at the moment David.
Date: 2/7/2021 4:59:00 AM
Like it, Chris! It seems the single bottle floated apart from the others, wanting to be noticed but afraid.
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Christopher Flaherty
Date: 2/7/2021 12:11:00 PM
Cheers Kim Thank you why yes indeed

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