Lots More I Love You

grey clouds flooded my vision,
the darkness stayed lining the walls to my sorrow soul,
never felt as those I belonged in this world but only to exist, in my troubled mind.
I suspected that this was really it, 
the endless supply of coldness to my heart,
to never feel the rumble of a beat.
to never again experience that breath taking moment,

until one day my grey clouds where parted,
the glory of the most amazing uncommon very beautiful sun shined through.
my darkness visited from time to time,
but never stayed for long,
with him I no longer feel has those I don't belong,
because when I'm in his arms,
I know where I belong.
he's smile brightens my world,
his breath supplies warmth to my heart,
I finally felt the rumble again.
the moment my eyes took in his beauty,
and I remember being breathless again,
every moment we spend together are breathless,
I love him more then I did before.


written by Davina browne 
1/03/15

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015



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Date: 7/24/2015 7:05:00 AM
I understand these feelings all too well... wow.... I love how you expressed such deep feelings of pain and self discovery into words...so beautiful Davina! Always, Laura
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