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Lost Until Found

Lost
                                                               in life
                                                          with not one
                                                     remembered dream
                                  only shattered daydeams that lead to scars...
                                                               Found
                                                             confused
                                                         as love picked
                                                        up a heart and
                                 brought dreams in color with hope and desire...

                                                                   M
                                                                    J
                                                                    F

Copyright © Michael J. Falotico | Year Posted 2012

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Shnkimmel Clarke Date: 11/18/2012 10:09:00 AM aww cute Login to Reply

Phyllis Babcock Date: 9/10/2012 11:03:00 AM Nicely done on this poem and love the shape and the unique ending with your initials. love phyl Login to Reply

Andrea Dietrich Date: 9/3/2012 10:30:00 AM This is so cool, MJ! I love the message it brings and the way you formatted it, even your initials going down at the end. You are a distinct talent! Good to see a new poem from you. Login to Reply

Linda-Marie Sweetheart Date: 9/3/2012 8:51:00 AM thankxxx Michael luv for my 2nd place win .. so honored to be among so many wonderful winners .. I am always excited about your themes and writing for u gives your JG great pleasure .. returning luv and hugs ..xoxo Login to Reply

Wilma Neels Date: 9/3/2012 7:16:00 AM I have no idea, they are looking at the computer screen while I am typing this comment :) lol Login to Reply

Wilma Neels Date: 9/3/2012 7:10:00 AM The best part of being found is having that safe haven. Enjoyed this beauty by you today.. Now why would you not like my new avatar? :( I think it looks cute :D luv CTH Login to Reply

Jack Ellison Date: 9/3/2012 6:31:00 AM In all honesty, Michael, I've been one of the lucky ones with a life free of too many downs and a whole big bunch of ups! Just one of the lucky ones, I guess! A good write... Jack Login to Reply

Linda-Marie Sweetheart Date: 9/2/2012 7:04:00 PM ONE SPECIAL LUV CAN MEND ALL THOSE BROKEN DREAMS MICHAEL LUV .. U HAVE WRITTEN AN EMOTIONAL EPIC SO MASTERFULLY .. JG IS RELATING TO EACH LINE ..XOXO Login to Reply

Joy Wellington Date: 9/1/2012 3:21:00 PM There is hope and that is most important. I so know about them shattered dreams Michael. I lived them. A write of renewal, of light and of the return of love. Great! One love. Joy Wells Login to Reply

Cindy Cayton Date: 9/1/2012 12:09:00 PM Ican relate to this. Its beautiful Michael. Well said! Cindy Login to Reply

Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 9/1/2012 11:14:00 AM If your dream is wonderfully it does not matter if it's black / white or in color. Dreams are important to keep - even daydreams. - Love it Michael. - Wish you a wonderful weekend. oxox / / hugs Anne-Lise :) Login to Reply

Cory Long Date: 9/1/2012 9:44:00 AM Love it!!. I like how you tied dreams into it.. nice job Michael.. hugs cory Login to Reply

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl Date: 9/1/2012 8:30:00 AM Like it Michael it says a lot in few words xx Login to Reply

Russell Sivey Date: 9/1/2012 8:14:00 AM I really enjoyed this very tremendously written work my friend! I was wasn't surprised at all with the eloquence that you used for this poem, you are always so free flowing and delightful! I feel exactly what it was you were trying to portray within this write, the loneliness and brokenness being brought out of the lost self esteem into as you so well put it, "hope and desire"(I'm assuming that is what you meant with your misspelling) What a fascinating and breathtaking poem! Great Work!! Login to Reply Michael J. Falotico Date: 9/1/2012 8:28:00 AM Thanks for the great comment as always and for the typo help, I type way to fast lol