Lost Universe Love

The stars whisk through the sky.
I move to a city a hundred miles away.

The moon glazes upon the shimmering ocean blue.
I rest my arms across the table contemplating whether this could be false or true.


A supernova collapses light years in the past.
Our love would never last.


The universe on it’s great expansion,
as our distance had an abortion.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Breidenthal Avatar
November 11, 2013 at 7:58 AM
Another awesome one! Love your style. Write on! You have much talent. Always, Laura
Kamoonpuri Avatar
November 4, 2013 at 1:45 AM
Wow awesome astral poem in metaphor. Poetic starry craft! And thnx.
Horsch Avatar
November 2, 2013 at 7:28 AM
I don't like it.
Guzzi Avatar
October 24, 2013 at 7:35 PM
The last line is confusing though I do realize you are juxtaposing birth & death Light & Love
Mehta Avatar
October 23, 2013 at 10:26 PM
Lovely expressions on love and lost love, Christian,
A  Avatar
October 23, 2013 at 5:40 PM
this is extremely pretty. ..love Skat
That Archaic Poet Avatar
October 23, 2013 at 3:28 PM
I like what you are saying here and I enjoyed this piece. I wish your rhymes had been a little tighter and more succinct, but I think you have a good piece, nonetheless. Kudos! :)
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