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Lost Universe Love

The stars whisk through the sky. I move to a city a hundred miles away. The moon glazes upon the shimmering ocean blue. I rest my arms across the table contemplating whether this could be false or true. A supernova collapses light years in the past. Our love would never last. The universe on it’s great expansion, as our distance had an abortion.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 11/11/2013 7:58:00 AM
Another awesome one! Love your style. Write on! You have much talent. Always, Laura
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Date: 11/4/2013 1:45:00 AM
Wow awesome astral poem in metaphor. Poetic starry craft! And thnx.
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Date: 11/2/2013 7:28:00 AM
I don't like it.
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Date: 10/24/2013 7:35:00 PM
The last line is confusing though I do realize you are juxtaposing birth & death Light & Love
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Date: 10/23/2013 10:26:00 PM
Lovely expressions on love and lost love, Christian,
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Date: 10/23/2013 5:40:00 PM
this is extremely pretty. ..love Skat
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Date: 10/23/2013 3:28:00 PM
I like what you are saying here and I enjoyed this piece. I wish your rhymes had been a little tighter and more succinct, but I think you have a good piece, nonetheless. Kudos! :)
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