Lost Triplets

Live with wife, Cathie, and our middle age son Scot Lost triplets with his former wife, both totally distraught Like a shot to the heart Depression off the chart Broke up their marriage, never got over the shock
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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De Beaulieu Avatar
June 6, 2017 at 3:18 PM
My problem is this: I wrote an eight verse poem,I will only have room for four verses, Do I go back to Submit to finish the last four verses? What do I do to have my whole poem submitted? Thank you for helping me.
De Beaulieu Avatar
June 8, 2017 at 12:58 PM
Yes,I did it! I was able to put all the verses down that I have written.
Ellison Avatar
June 6, 2017 at 3:40 PM
This is very unusual... I don't understand! It doesn't seem right, so what I would suggest is that you ask for help from the people that run the sight! I have yet to hear of sure a problem! I'm sure it can be fixed quite easily! Sorry I couldn't be of any help my dear friend! Let me know how it gets solved! Love, Jack xxx
De Beaulieu Avatar
June 6, 2017 at 3:20 PM
hugs
De Beaulieu Avatar
June 6, 2017 at 3:10 PM
Hello Jack,this is a sad limerick you wrote, babies are born healthy, and some are not. It is hard to lose a child.Then it takes time to get over the loss. I have a question. to ask about submitting a poem I wonder if you can help me with the problem i am having?
De Beaulieu Avatar
June 6, 2017 at 5:55 PM
Oikay I will.
Ellison Avatar
June 6, 2017 at 3:36 PM
As difficult is was, my dear son Scott has adjusted very well! He is a totally amazing person... I know I know he's my son! But Scott is an AMAZING individual! Does it sound like I'm proud??? LOL I will try to help but I'm no guru! Love, Jack xxx
Rebstock Avatar
June 5, 2017 at 6:42 PM
Sorry for all of your loss. Can relate as my daughter lost triplets, too. Expressed my sadness in a quatrain as you did in a poem.
Ellison Avatar
June 5, 2017 at 7:06 PM
So sad to hear about your daughter's loss as well! It can be a life changing event! I appreciate that you dropped by... thank you, love, Jack xxx
Flats Avatar
June 5, 2017 at 8:32 AM
No lim'rik, just hugs ~ jj
Ellison Avatar
June 5, 2017 at 8:39 AM
Sweet of you, my dearest friend! Jack
Pigeon Tart Avatar
June 5, 2017 at 7:20 AM
:( my Granma lost a set of twins full term, cried for them till the end. Touching and sad one Jack xomo
Ellison Avatar
June 5, 2017 at 8:24 AM
Things like this can break a person but Scott has adjusted and I am so so proud of him! He's my hero! Love and hugs. Jack xxx
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