Lost Triplets

Live with wife, Cathie, and our middle age son Scot Lost triplets with his former wife, both totally distraught Like a shot to the heart Depression off the chart Broke up their marriage, never got over the shock
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Date: 6/6/2017 3:18:00 PM
My problem is this: I wrote an eight verse poem,I will only have room for four verses, Do I go back to Submit to finish the last four verses? What do I do to have my whole poem submitted? Thank you for helping me.
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 6/8/2017 12:58:00 PM
Yes,I did it! I was able to put all the verses down that I have written.
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Jack Ellison
Date: 6/6/2017 3:40:00 PM
This is very unusual... I don't understand! It doesn't seem right, so what I would suggest is that you ask for help from the people that run the sight! I have yet to hear of sure a problem! I'm sure it can be fixed quite easily! Sorry I couldn't be of any help my dear friend! Let me know how it gets solved! Love, Jack xxx
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 6/6/2017 3:20:00 PM
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Date: 6/6/2017 3:10:00 PM
Hello Jack,this is a sad limerick you wrote, babies are born healthy, and some are not. It is hard to lose a child.Then it takes time to get over the loss. I have a question. to ask about submitting a poem I wonder if you can help me with the problem i am having?
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 6/6/2017 5:55:00 PM
Oikay I will.
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Jack Ellison
Date: 6/6/2017 3:36:00 PM
As difficult is was, my dear son Scott has adjusted very well! He is a totally amazing person... I know I know he's my son! But Scott is an AMAZING individual! Does it sound like I'm proud??? LOL I will try to help but I'm no guru! Love, Jack xxx
Date: 6/5/2017 6:42:00 PM
Sorry for all of your loss. Can relate as my daughter lost triplets, too. Expressed my sadness in a quatrain as you did in a poem.
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Jack Ellison
Date: 6/5/2017 7:06:00 PM
So sad to hear about your daughter's loss as well! It can be a life changing event! I appreciate that you dropped by... thank you, love, Jack xxx
Date: 6/5/2017 8:32:00 AM
No lim'rik, just hugs ~ jj
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Jack Ellison
Date: 6/5/2017 8:39:00 AM
Sweet of you, my dearest friend! Jack
Date: 6/5/2017 7:20:00 AM
:( my Granma lost a set of twins full term, cried for them till the end. Touching and sad one Jack xomo
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Jack Ellison
Date: 6/5/2017 8:24:00 AM
Things like this can break a person but Scott has adjusted and I am so so proud of him! He's my hero! Love and hugs. Jack xxx
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