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"lost Tears"

Wax rolls down slowly like a tear from a sad eye, both form a lost piece..

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 12/10/2012 10:00:00 PM

sad.... one can only wipe the tear,,, deep..pd

Date: 8/24/2010 3:16:00 PM

Wow! What a creative use of imagery. So much captured in just three lines. Thank you for sharing them with us and for your kind comment. Karen

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 8/24/2010 9:12:00 AM

Enjoyed reading your poetry today Michael. Thank you for your kind comments. It is always a pleasure to read your poetry. Love, Carol

James Fraser

Date: 8/23/2010 12:40:00 PM

Sometimes looking at them, they are like tears of fears. Nice Haiku Michael >> James

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 8/23/2010 12:25:00 PM

So touching and moving Michael.. my tender White Knight... luv your title.. so captivating..like your words.. always..your Jersey Girl... with luv..

Sharon Tideswell

Date: 8/23/2010 11:30:00 AM

Beautiful imagery Michael. I love watching those tears of wax roll down a burning candle. Great last line ~ Sharon :)

Wilma Neels

Date: 8/23/2010 11:18:00 AM

Sometimes those lost tears bring forth the strength to go on.. I enjoyed this, different from your normal writes.. Shows your flexibility, love Wilma

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 8/23/2010 9:36:00 AM

Michael, why the sad one. Still a fine haiku. Well done, truly enjoyed just stoping by to say hi!,..p.d.

T.L. Drover

Date: 8/23/2010 9:17:00 AM

I love the last line of this haiku. Great imagery.