"lost Tears"

Wax rolls down slowly
like a tear from a sad eye,
both form a lost piece..
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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December 10, 2012 at 10:00 PM
sad.... one can only wipe the tear,,, deep..pd
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August 24, 2010 at 3:16 PM
Wow! What a creative use of imagery. So much captured in just three lines. Thank you for sharing them with us and for your kind comment. Karen
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August 24, 2010 at 9:12 AM
Enjoyed reading your poetry today Michael. Thank you for your kind comments. It is always a pleasure to read your poetry. Love, Carol
Fraser Avatar
August 23, 2010 at 12:40 PM
Sometimes looking at them, they are like tears of fears. Nice Haiku Michael >> James
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August 23, 2010 at 12:25 PM
So touching and moving Michael.. my tender White Knight... luv your title.. so captivating..like your words.. always..your Jersey Girl... with luv..
Tideswell Avatar
August 23, 2010 at 11:30 AM
Beautiful imagery Michael. I love watching those tears of wax roll down a burning candle. Great last line ~ Sharon :)
Neels Avatar
August 23, 2010 at 11:18 AM
Sometimes those lost tears bring forth the strength to go on.. I enjoyed this, different from your normal writes.. Shows your flexibility, love Wilma
A   Avatar
August 23, 2010 at 9:36 AM
Michael, why the sad one. Still a fine haiku. Well done, truly enjoyed just stoping by to say hi!,..p.d.
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August 23, 2010 at 9:17 AM
I love the last line of this haiku. Great imagery.
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