Lost Souls In Navy Blue Alleys

Ghosts rise up at night
From the sinking tale of tides
rocks hear all the Cries


Charma













(Not for  the  contest,but inspired by Raul's picture 'Ghost tides')
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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February 5, 2012 at 5:34 PM
hi..Charmaine, how are you? a very nice lovely inspired haiku... it was nice to hear from you... how is your soup relationship..if you dont mind me asking! i've always wonder what happened to you it was very nice to hear from you thank you thank you take self always..pd
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February 7, 2012 at 5:09 AM
Hi dear i'm back to soup..loving it as ever.Many things happened which made me stop writitng,but now it is possible for me to return.. I missed here so much..and i will look forward to read some great poetry of yours ..Hugs Charma
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February 22, 2010 at 8:53 AM
Great imagination in this write that should do well in the competition. Good luck. Thanks for stopping by and commenting on my work. The poem was about a early morning thunder and lighting storm that I used the bowling as a metaphoric language to represent the sounds of the storm.The dog was real. Sara
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February 22, 2010 at 7:17 AM
very nice..TAH
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February 21, 2010 at 4:45 PM
Haunting Haiku Charmaine >> James
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February 21, 2010 at 3:44 PM
Hello, Charma, grazzi ghal comments! When I was a child i culd never sleep in a dark room and a light must have switched on all night. I was really scared of the dark. Meanwhile - with the age - I am enjoying the dark as it promises a godd and relaxing sleep. Wishing you a good night as well and a very good new week!...Gert
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