Jeanne Mcgee Poet Blank verse

Lost September

September years are past our bloom
           For lost upon the grey forlorn
       In misty dreams I hear your voice
         My hands I raise to touch your grace
            Dissolve in tears my life erase
               Mistakes I made amend your fate
             To live Septembers’ Autumn glow
           And heal our heart of lost desires
        As winters chill begins its reach
     Remember loves past still to keep


written  10-11-2019
title number 2 - Lost September
Pick A Title, Vol 10 - Blank Verse Poetry Contest
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Janice Canerdy October 12, 2019 at 7:47 PM Lovely poem with a moving, bittersweet tone, Jeanne. Janice Jeanne Mcgee October 12, 2019 at 7:50 PM you felt it perfectly. thanks for stopping by for a read.

Sandra Adams October 12, 2019 at 9:53 AM poignant, but yet beautiful at the same time... one can feel the longing and sadness lingering....wonderful poem Jeanne :) hugs Jeanne Mcgee October 12, 2019 at 7:49 PM Thank you Sandra. You felt it's essence...

Regina Mcintosh October 11, 2019 at 9:36 PM A gem. I enjoyed it very much and wish you the best in the contest, Bless you with love, Gina Jeanne Mcgee October 11, 2019 at 10:41 PM Gina, your words always give me encouragement...you are another of the gems here on poetry soup. thank you.

Gershon Wolf October 11, 2019 at 2:37 PM This is simultaneously haunting and enchanting, a delicate balance. Wonderfully penned, Jeanne! :) gw (soup mail, please) Jeanne Mcgee October 11, 2019 at 3:27 PM As soon as I have internet connection. ..up and done! You are a sweetheart of a friend.

Heidi Sands October 11, 2019 at 2:12 PM Beautifully written. I love this and the great last line too :) Jeanne Mcgee October 11, 2019 at 3:28 PM Thank you Heidi. Always in our hearts.