Lost Puppy Nr

There was a lovely puppy dog
Who loved to play all day
Someone left the door open
Puppy went astray

He found himself in a big big space
With fast things that jumped and skid
Lots of legs on the pavement too
Got frightened so he hid

The sun went down and he was cold
His tummy rolled and rumbled
Wished now he hadn't been bold
“I am sooo scared “ he mumbled

He then heard a voice he knew
So yelped jumping with delight
Saw his master standing there 
New everything would be just right


Moral of this story children, is never let go of your folks hands when you are out whether shopping or in a park, unless you are told it is ok to do so.  It is a big world and you could get lost so easily.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013



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Date: 4/1/2013 3:29:00 PM
Great NR with a morale..Enjoyed reading this one..Congrats..Sara
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Date: 3/30/2013 10:49:00 AM
LOVE the message... Congratulations on the win!
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Seren Roberts
Date: 3/30/2013 10:58:00 AM
Thank you Carol, It is so easy for a child to get lost in a crowd, if they are taught from very young it might help. Learning with rhymes is the easiest way i guess. ...Seren
Date: 3/29/2013 8:13:00 PM
Seren, congratulations with your wonderful win in Debra's "Nursery Rhyme" contest. Love the message in the poem. Take care and enjoy the up coming Easter Holiday. Always*LINDA
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Date: 3/30/2013 4:21:00 AM
Thank you PD. Happy Easter to you and yours.....Seren
Date: 3/29/2013 4:36:00 PM
sure a cute one, Seren. congrats to you.
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Seren Roberts
Date: 3/29/2013 7:46:00 PM
Thank you Andrea, was trying to tell young children not to wander off and hold adults hand....Seren
Date: 3/29/2013 12:44:00 PM
Loved that this had a good message !! Well done Seren!! Congratulations on your win and thanks for entering my contest !!
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Seren Roberts
Date: 3/29/2013 7:46:00 PM
thank you, Debra....Seren
Date: 3/29/2013 12:29:00 PM
Congratulations love another top notch win , well done xx
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Seren Roberts
Date: 3/29/2013 7:47:00 PM
Awww thanks Mandy and to you too on a great win ...Seren
Date: 3/17/2013 7:16:00 AM
Seren this is truly a clever poem, and the moral overtones are not lost, also one can read into this, affection and sincerity.. i really do like this...
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Seren Roberts
Date: 3/17/2013 7:23:00 AM
Thanks Harry....Seren
Date: 3/16/2013 1:56:00 PM
This is a brilliant and wondrous write my friend! I loved how you wove this story together, very intriguing and perfectly rhymed! What a lovely poem, Great Work!!
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Seren Roberts
Date: 3/17/2013 7:23:00 AM
Thanks Russell....Seren
Date: 3/16/2013 1:06:00 PM
Cute and so right on the button! I see you got your win over England. I was watching as well. I'm afraid it was my first match. Those guys are crazy!! RAY
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Seren Roberts
Date: 3/17/2013 7:24:00 AM
Lol whats crazy about rugby, its a mans game, notlike soccer. .....Seren
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