Lost Puppy Nr

There was a lovely puppy dog
Who loved to play all day
Someone left the door open
Puppy went astray

He found himself in a big big space
With fast things that jumped and skid
Lots of legs on the pavement too
Got frightened so he hid

The sun went down and he was cold
His tummy rolled and rumbled
Wished now he hadn't been bold
“I am sooo scared “ he mumbled

He then heard a voice he knew
So yelped jumping with delight
Saw his master standing there 
New everything would be just right


Moral of this story children, is never let go of your folks hands when you are out whether shopping or in a park, unless you are told it is ok to do so.  It is a big world and you could get lost so easily.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Kendrick Avatar
April 1, 2013 at 3:29 PM
Great NR with a morale..Enjoyed reading this one..Congrats..Sara
Eastman Avatar
March 30, 2013 at 10:49 AM
LOVE the message... Congratulations on the win!
Roberts Avatar
March 30, 2013 at 10:58 AM
Thank you Carol, It is so easy for a child to get lost in a crowd, if they are taught from very young it might help. Learning with rhymes is the easiest way i guess. ...Seren
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March 29, 2013 at 8:13 PM
Seren, congratulations with your wonderful win in Debra's "Nursery Rhyme" contest. Love the message in the poem. Take care and enjoy the up coming Easter Holiday. Always*LINDA
Roberts Avatar
March 30, 2013 at 4:21 AM
Thank you PD. Happy Easter to you and yours.....Seren
Dietrich Avatar
March 29, 2013 at 4:36 PM
sure a cute one, Seren. congrats to you.
Roberts Avatar
March 29, 2013 at 7:46 PM
Thank you Andrea, was trying to tell young children not to wander off and hold adults hand....Seren
Squyres Avatar
March 29, 2013 at 12:44 PM
Loved that this had a good message !! Well done Seren!! Congratulations on your win and thanks for entering my contest !!
Roberts Avatar
March 29, 2013 at 7:46 PM
thank you, Debra....Seren
Tams The Golden Girl Avatar
March 29, 2013 at 12:29 PM
Congratulations love another top notch win , well done xx
Roberts Avatar
March 29, 2013 at 7:47 PM
Awww thanks Mandy and to you too on a great win ...Seren
Horsman Avatar
March 17, 2013 at 7:16 AM
Seren this is truly a clever poem, and the moral overtones are not lost, also one can read into this, affection and sincerity.. i really do like this...
Roberts Avatar
March 17, 2013 at 7:23 AM
Thanks Harry....Seren
Sivey Avatar
March 16, 2013 at 1:56 PM
This is a brilliant and wondrous write my friend! I loved how you wove this story together, very intriguing and perfectly rhymed! What a lovely poem, Great Work!!
Roberts Avatar
March 17, 2013 at 7:23 AM
Thanks Russell....Seren
Dillard Avatar
March 16, 2013 at 1:06 PM
Cute and so right on the button! I see you got your win over England. I was watching as well. I'm afraid it was my first match. Those guys are crazy!! RAY
Roberts Avatar
March 17, 2013 at 7:24 AM
Lol whats crazy about rugby, its a mans game, notlike soccer. .....Seren
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