Lost Poem

Incorrigible
Incorrect – uncorrectable
Ideas incorporeal 
Beginnings to incept 
Ideology to inject
A reality too surreal to accept

An indifference that infects
A fate begins to seal
Evidence to detect
Death at the door and loss at your heels
Realization life is a wreck
Too afraid of the now, the real.
Face the charade of your situation
Face how disappointment feels
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Pinet Avatar
March 17, 2015 at 11:04 AM
Your emotions cling to this piece like a second skin. A little melancholy with an abrupt pace that entraps the reader into your emotional flow. Good work. Emile #7
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April 6, 2015 at 8:46 PM
Thank you so much for your visit and amazing comments, they are always so wonderful.. Cheers Joel
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