Lost One Shoe

No longer am I a person Lost one shoe, life has worsened Can't go on Hobbling along Must I go barefoot to relieve the burden
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020

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Tor Avatar
July 19, 2020 at 8:51 PM
Sometimes we have to improvise to move forward. Gday Jack...
Ellison Avatar
July 22, 2020 at 7:13 AM
You speak the truth my good friend! Life is a matter of adjusting to the current situation! Good advice!
Michael Avatar
July 18, 2020 at 1:20 PM
Yes...or do a dancing when you walk...
Ellison Avatar
July 18, 2020 at 3:15 PM
Trust me... I am an amazing dancer! LOL
Pigeon Tart Avatar
July 18, 2020 at 7:53 AM
Barefoot is great for the brain!!! Takes a little while to get used to... but you do get better at it with practice ;),
Ellison Avatar
July 18, 2020 at 8:04 AM
On average, I wear shoes about one hour a day!!! Good morning dear Mo! XOX
Blown Avatar
July 18, 2020 at 7:52 AM
...oh pen inkling of words!?....lol....stan sand
Ellison Avatar
July 18, 2020 at 8:02 AM
Words are spilling over!!! Haven't used up my alloted number yet! What happens when we do? Can we buy another bunch for a bargain price as we hit 100? Just musing... LOL Good morning Stan Sand!
Cunningham Avatar
July 18, 2020 at 6:44 AM
May I suggest walking on your hands to relieve the pressure on your footsies
Ellison Avatar
July 18, 2020 at 6:55 AM
GREAT IDEA Sir Thomas... gonna try that! What will we call em? Handsies??? LOL
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