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Lost One Shoe

No longer am I a person Lost one shoe, life has worsened Can't go on Hobbling along Must I go barefoot to relieve the burden

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Michael Tor

Date: 7/19/2020 8:51:00 PM

Sometimes we have to improvise to move forward. Gday Jack...

Jack Ellison
Date: 7/22/2020 7:13:00 AM

You speak the truth my good friend! Life is a matter of adjusting to the current situation! Good advice!

Arturo Michael

Date: 7/18/2020 1:20:00 PM

Yes...or do a dancing when you walk...

Jack Ellison
Date: 7/18/2020 3:15:00 PM

Trust me... I am an amazing dancer! LOL

Maureen Mcgreavy

Date: 7/18/2020 7:53:00 AM

Barefoot is great for the brain!!! Takes a little while to get used to... but you do get better at it with practice ;),

Jack Ellison
Date: 7/18/2020 8:04:00 AM

On average, I wear shoes about one hour a day!!! Good morning dear Mo! XOX

Sand Blown

Date: 7/18/2020 7:52:00 AM

...oh pen inkling of words!?....lol....stan sand

Jack Ellison
Date: 7/18/2020 8:02:00 AM

Words are spilling over!!! Haven't used up my alloted number yet! What happens when we do? Can we buy another bunch for a bargain price as we hit 100? Just musing... LOL Good morning Stan Sand!

Tom Cunningham

Date: 7/18/2020 6:44:00 AM

May I suggest walking on your hands to relieve the pressure on your footsies

Jack Ellison
Date: 7/18/2020 6:55:00 AM

GREAT IDEA Sir Thomas... gonna try that! What will we call em? Handsies??? LOL