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Lost Myself Too You

I fear I lost myself within you our lives and soul have been entwined our mystical love within our minds Are very in tune with universal sync those words you have spoken to me now I knew you have enraptured my heart Everything about you is familiar you have captured, enticed my soul as I surrendered my heart to you. 03/23/2017 Erin A. Charles

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Date: 3/24/2017 3:04:00 AM
How scary and yet how wonderful it is the same time: love. Beautiful rhyme.
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Erin A. Charles
Date: 3/28/2017 1:04:00 PM
Thank you so very much Darren for your beauty of a statement.
Date: 3/23/2017 3:29:00 PM
This was beautiful Erin. Your descriptive phrasing of overwhelming all consuming love is just gorgeous. Nicely done.
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Erin A. Charles
Date: 3/23/2017 3:34:00 PM
Why thank you so very much Chris for your beauty of a comment on this poem of mine. Will stop by later and read some of poetic devices. Erin

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