Lost Myself Too You

I fear I lost myself within you
our lives and soul have been entwined
our mystical love within our minds

Are very in tune with universal sync
those words you have spoken to me now
I knew you have enraptured my heart

Everything about you is familiar
you have captured, enticed my soul
as I surrendered my heart to you.

03/23/2017
Erin A. Charles
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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March 24, 2017 at 3:04 AM
How scary and yet how wonderful it is the same time: love. Beautiful rhyme.
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March 28, 2017 at 1:04 PM
Thank you so very much Darren for your beauty of a statement.
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March 23, 2017 at 3:29 PM
This was beautiful Erin. Your descriptive phrasing of overwhelming all consuming love is just gorgeous. Nicely done.
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March 23, 2017 at 3:34 PM
Why thank you so very much Chris for your beauty of a comment on this poem of mine. Will stop by later and read some of poetic devices. Erin
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