Lost My Song

When in this life I felt down
You were the one that was around

Maybe it was the way you held my hand
I knew in my heart you would understand

I miss the way we used to sit and talk
The times we didn't look at the clock

The way you walked in those tight jeans
Made me want to pull my skin and scream

I remember trembling at your touch
I love and loved you so very much

I am lost inside now you're gone
Baby you are still my life's song

When I look to the night sky, I tear
I miss you and wish you were here

Edward J Ebbs - 05/18/14


Written for a Contest, My Beloved Sweetheart

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Dean Marais

March 31, 2015 at 7:34 PM

I cant even comprehend this kind of pain is like, but I struggle to comprehend the kind of love you've had as well. I can only hope to be blessed with such a love as well, even if it is for a short time

Edward Ebbs

April 1, 2015 at 7:29 AM

Thank You, Dean...

James Horn

October 4, 2014 at 5:09 AM

Would like to see an intro to this poem. Who is it about? We used sit and talk. You need a to between USED and SIT then it will become well-used. Jim Horn

Edward Ebbs

October 5, 2014 at 12:46 PM

Thank You :)