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Lost Lover***double Acrostic***

Lethargy and depression Overpowers my once Sanguine outlook on life. Now I seem Taboo Lavish lavender memories Out-stretch and terrorize my dreams. An infinite Vault inside my mind. Of Endless thoughts, of Redundant grief. Jared Pickett.. 8/1/09

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Date: 8/6/2009 9:18:00 AM
Arn't acrostics fun ... !!! Love the "lavish lavender memories" line ... great stuff here, Jared. Glad you are part of the Soup ... smile
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Date: 8/3/2009 10:20:00 AM
Awesome expression, your poem, Jerard. There's a greener grass, once you get passed the fence, that blockes you in, God bless, Moses
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Date: 8/2/2009 7:56:00 AM
awesome--charma
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Date: 8/2/2009 4:27:00 AM
Excellent Acrostic Jared>>James
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Date: 8/2/2009 12:45:00 AM
The second stanza is powerful, we all face lovelorn sagas. Keep up the great work...Raul
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Date: 8/1/2009 10:10:00 PM
redundant grief can be difficult to overcome, but you possess "Lavish lavender memories" excellent! Jared!..and thanks for cool comment! jimbo
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