Lost Lover***double Acrostic***

Lethargy and depression
Overpowers my once
Sanguine outlook on life. Now I seem
Taboo

Lavish lavender memories
Out-stretch and terrorize my dreams. An infinite
Vault inside my mind. Of 
Endless thoughts, of
Redundant grief.



Jared Pickett..
8/1/09
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Mason Avatar
August 6, 2009 at 9:18 AM
Arn't acrostics fun ... !!! Love the "lavish lavender memories" line ... great stuff here, Jared. Glad you are part of the Soup ... smile
Freeman Avatar
August 3, 2009 at 10:20 AM
Awesome expression, your poem, Jerard. There's a greener grass, once you get passed the fence, that blockes you in, God bless, Moses
Chircop Avatar
August 2, 2009 at 7:56 AM
awesome--charma
Fraser Avatar
August 2, 2009 at 4:27 AM
Excellent Acrostic Jared>>James
Moreno Avatar
August 2, 2009 at 12:45 AM
The second stanza is powerful, we all face lovelorn sagas. Keep up the great work...Raul
Goff Avatar
August 1, 2009 at 10:10 PM
redundant grief can be difficult to overcome, but you possess "Lavish lavender memories" excellent! Jared!..and thanks for cool comment! jimbo
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