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Lost Loved One

Engaging alters prance through the wind Melodic songs of a peaceful goodbye Tranquility begins to surround her tonight This twilight death of a heart dipping under The passion is leaving her behind forever Let Destiny take her course of aftermath Bloodless painful stitchings of a lost love When death decided she was his next victim Her life will carry on through the dark mist A cerulean blanket lay upon her thoughts Her devoted chaliced love left her this night As his phantasm raises from earth to heaven (NOTE: thought i'd add this isn't about someone's lover leaving them, but about a wife's husband dying, most ppl didn't see that)

Copyright © | Year Posted 2006




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Date: 1/11/2012 7:00:00 AM
I have enjoyed reading your poetry today Destiny. I wish you the best in the New Year in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. Love, Carol
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Date: 11/10/2010 1:44:00 PM
i love this.... it made me think of that terrence trent darby song! great write!
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