Lost Loved One

Engaging alters prance through the wind
Melodic songs of a peaceful goodbye
Tranquility begins to surround her tonight
This twilight death of a heart dipping under

The passion is leaving her behind forever
Let Destiny take her course of aftermath
Bloodless painful stitchings of a lost love
When death decided she was his next victim

Her life will carry on through the dark mist
A cerulean blanket lay upon her thoughts
Her devoted chaliced love left her this night
As his phantasm raises from earth to heaven


(NOTE: thought i'd add this isn't about someone's 
lover leaving them, but about a wife's husband 
dying, most ppl didn't see that)
Copyright © | Year Posted 2006

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January 11, 2012 at 7:00 AM
I have enjoyed reading your poetry today Destiny. I wish you the best in the New Year in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. Love, Carol
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November 10, 2010 at 1:44 PM
i love this.... it made me think of that terrence trent darby song! great write!
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