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Lost Love Aussie Style

I was in love with the most lovable sheila but she did darn take off with me heeler Overnight, she had packnd their bags not just me dog, gone too with me scallywags Left with just a simple note she had found a more loving bloke Heartbroken to have lost them all I gave me mate Bluey a call Together we drank more than just a slab ending up so hammered, he had to call us a cab As the lonely days passed and tears filled me eyes by crikey it hit me, suddenly I came to realise What a bloomin idiot, she deserved such love and respect every night boozin with me mates, my true love I did neglect I'm gunna cut out me drinkin and win her heart back fair dinkum fella's, you can flamin bet on that!

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Date: 6/9/2017 3:52:00 PM
A very beautiful written poem, life became very difficult to live when someone so close to you or someone you love left you, i do hope that she come back to you and you should live a happy life however I m new on this site and would really appreciate if you could find time to read my poems and give your honest reviews about them
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