Lost Love and Fragile Knees

Now that you’re gone,
I cant hold on,
I cant beg nor plead,
Whilst on my knees,
I shall not bother to ask you to stay,
I’ll take my heart and I’ll walk away.

Now that you’re gone,
I’m broken inside,
The love that you spoke of,
Every word that you lied,
I hung on,
I believed
For that I was wrong.
Now its to late and that love has gone.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Pearson Avatar
October 6, 2010 at 9:58 AM
great poem and your better than any man dont forget that your a wonderful and creative girl xx Elton
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March 22, 2010 at 4:10 PM
Wonderful poem Nicola, a warm welcome to the Soup >> James
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March 10, 2010 at 12:55 PM
Welcome to the Poetry Soup Family of poets... please continue to share your creawtive writes with us all.. as this delight tonight... I hear u loud and clear Nicola and have been through this myself.. emotional write.. luv..Linda-Marie "Sweetheart" of Poetry Soup..
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March 10, 2010 at 11:32 AM
Very sad write in this one. Keep the creative pen flowing. Sara
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March 10, 2010 at 10:59 AM
I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Nicola. I also wish you the best in your writing endeavors. If you have questions please feel free to ask anyone here. We are all willing to help and if we don't know the answer we will find someone who does. Love, Carol
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