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Lost Love and Eternal Love

Lost Love and Eternal Love In the summer we'd meet and we'd sip iced tea, and the waiter saw kisses as people passed; as I whispered my feelings into your ear, I was sure in my heart that our love would last. Love can be a moment or an eternity. Now the winter is here and your heart has closed, all the warmth that we shared is now frigid cold; and I wonder what changed; why I lost your love, as I sit at our table alone and old. Love can be a moment or an eternity. In the fall we went for long peaceful walks, hand in hand in lust, but still so unsure; I wanted you to say, I love you dear, then in time, you asked and I said, yes sir. Love can be a moment or an eternity. In the spring, so excited we married forever, it was a perfect union and full of beauty; and although God took you home one day, our sweet love will last for all of eternity. _________________________ November 25, 2015 Rhyme Co-write For the contest, Write Me A Duet, sponsor, Heather Ober

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Date: 6/16/2016 10:57:00 PM
oh I love this romantic write Jack but such a sad ending. love phyl
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Date: 4/30/2016 2:19:00 PM
Its been a while I visited.. I have also not been online for a while due to my work but I am back now and this piece is just the perfect start I need to come back home to my wonderful poetrysoup. This is amazing, beautiful and a high seven! Well done friend
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Date: 3/16/2016 10:00:00 PM
Sad, Jack, but real...very real.
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Date: 1/27/2016 9:38:00 PM
LOVELY WRITE... SKAT
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Date: 1/25/2016 12:57:00 PM
My senses in totality are in awe of your wonderful lines. Liquefied bliss from the boil of glorious words has brought out enchanting aroma beyond scaling. 7 is simply an underscore for this fine share.
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Date: 1/21/2016 5:56:00 AM
Jack this is a lovely collaboration :) lfde Wilma
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Date: 1/3/2016 2:48:00 PM
A lovely collaboration based on never ending memories and love. I, too am wondering who the partner in ink is!:) gl in the contest. // paul
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Date: 1/2/2016 7:48:00 PM
a sweet and sad duet, Jack. So who is the co-author!!
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Date: 1/2/2016 5:16:00 PM
Ahh!! Reads like a winner..Way to go..Thanks for the visits to my page..Sara
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Date: 1/2/2016 5:13:00 PM
Good job, Jack.
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Date: 12/30/2015 10:21:00 PM
I do hope to see you on top of her list.. Well done. LINDA
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Date: 12/29/2015 5:22:00 PM
Nice job. It is best to have loved and cherish the good memories than not to have ventured out and see it go one day. But we always have more love to give so rejoice in the time you have left.
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Date: 12/29/2015 4:05:00 PM
beautiful but such a sad ending Jack a lovely collaboration:-) good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx
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