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Lost Love

It was the furtive glances that drew me I sat nonchalant about those who came The crazy curves led me to the mighty And purple sculpture of a tipsy flame You responded with the turquoise ocean I failed to feel it was shallow water I gave you my silence and commotion Like the Kanchenjunga and Gibraltar Then you met the warmer spring that charmed you An ascetic attitude towards me You grew while shifting to the reddened hue Of the hibiscus as I turned boozy I lost all buds and leaves of my pink tree A humble floater a poor refugee February 8, 2018 English Sonnet Lost Love - Poetry Contest Sponsored by: John Hamilton

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Date: 2/12/2018 6:30:00 PM
Congratulations on your win, Probir! Hugs Eve ~`*
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Probir Gupta
Date: 2/13/2018 2:34:00 AM
Thank you, Eve ...
Date: 2/12/2018 4:25:00 PM
Such wondrous imagery adorns your sonnet Probir. Excellent use of the required words as they melt into the beauty of your poem. Beautiful closing couplet. Congratulations on your lovely placement in the contest. Warmest wishes. ~Susan
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Probir Gupta
Date: 2/13/2018 2:37:00 AM
Thank you, Susan ... My words are very simple and mostly coloquial ... I am grateful to readers like you who nonetheless like my poem ...
Date: 2/12/2018 2:33:00 PM
Congrats on your win, Probir.
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Probir Gupta
Date: 2/13/2018 2:38:00 AM
Thank you, Line ...
Date: 2/8/2018 7:57:00 PM
Very translucent and sensual.
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Probir Gupta
Date: 2/9/2018 6:00:00 AM
Thank you ...
Date: 2/8/2018 1:25:00 PM
Your creativity amazes me Probir! Another outstanding offering! I love this piece! : )
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Probir Gupta
Date: 2/9/2018 6:01:00 AM
Why, you are creative too in your poetry ... Thank you for liking mine ...
Date: 2/8/2018 11:40:00 AM
Excellent sonnet, Probir. Creative theme..best for a win.
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Probir Gupta
Date: 2/8/2018 11:52:00 AM
Thank you very much, Vijay ...

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