Bruce Adams Poet Acrostic

Lost Love

Like the sun's eternal warmth
     Our love is beyond this earth
     Victory over all the worlds wealth nothing compared to
     Eternal passion only you can bring

     He came along, tall, dark, handsome
     Under a bus you threw me, no stopping 
     Real love can't be bought or forced, set you free
     Two of you together, my soul torn
     Single life again, memory of you forever mine.
     
     

     
     
     01/19/2017
     Message in a Bottle Contest

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John Herlihy January 29, 2017 at 11:05 PM A tight, compact and powerful poem. It doesn't have to win a contest to be a winner. This poem has already won simply by existing. A sore topic sweetly handled. JH

Andrea Dietrich January 21, 2017 at 9:35 PM I really like how you did this, Bruce. I don't see congrats and it strikes me that you did not entitle this Message in a Bottle. I wish I Had seen this earlier and told you. To get on the winner list you had to give it that title. I think it had the potential to be a winner! SEVEN