Lost Love

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This is my first couplet. I'm having a blast trying the different forms of poetry and hope I keep learning and growing. Thank you to anyone who takes time to read this one and God bless you all.

We fought all the night through Finally dividing the property in two Never realizing the depth of pain Feelings so genuine we couldn’t feign Ominous arguments fell from our lips Creating havoc with a poison eclipse Words so careless and impetuous It felt like they had been an auspice Fighting much like two children Refusing the possibility of being beaten Establishing a cold, bitter war Between two hearts who loved before We are only two more individuals Lost within a world that crumbles What happened to the true love? Once, we fit together like a glove!

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Robin Davis

Date: 7/26/2014 9:45:00 PM

Regina So sad and painful. It's tough when love falls apart and can't be put back together. Thank you for the sweet comment on my Your Kindness poem