Lost Love

My heart still hurts when I think 
of you
Because of the heartache I've
been through
How could it be that you let me 
fall...
Gone suddenly when I thought I 
had it all!

In my life you're the biggest
mistake
My dreams, my future... I put at 
stake
Now I realize how cruel you are!
Do I deserve this never 
healing scar?...

For all the tears you made me 
cry...
For all the pain everytime you tell 
a lie,
For the days I wanna give up but 
still i try
Thank you! Now you're so small 
in my eye.

The love has gone, nothing left 
but anger!
But I won't revenge nor wish you 
danger
Despite all the crap you did to 
me...
I'm still thankful you came to my 
way.

True! Everything happens for a 
reason
You put me in vain, but i've 
learned my
lesson
Because of you... I'm now a 
stronger person
The pain is still there... but life 
goes on!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014



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Date: 6/10/2014 2:02:00 PM
Felt the emotions in this piece Angelyn! Congratulations on being featured ! Nicole
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Date: 6/11/2014 4:22:00 AM
Thanks Nicole:) I wrote this many years ago when I was brokenhearted with my first love...
Date: 6/9/2014 7:34:00 AM
Angelyn, , Congratulations on having your poem Featured on the Poetry Soups Home Page. Enjoy the coming week. Always & Forever ~LINDA~
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Date: 6/11/2014 4:28:00 AM
Thanks Linda... I didn't expect to be featured especially I am new here. I love this site...and I love you all!
Date: 6/9/2014 7:01:00 AM
A piece of good poetry. Keep it up and congrats on your poem selected to be featured, Anjelin
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Date: 6/11/2014 4:34:00 AM
Hi Dr. Ram, Thanks for taking time to read poem, and for the appreciation. I am truly inspired to write more because of all your positive comments. Looking forward to read all your works too. I knew PoetrySoup has a bunch of great writers and I will learn a lot from you all.
Date: 6/8/2014 12:17:00 PM
- Warm welcome to PoetrySoup, Angelyn :) - I choose your first moving and well written poem - Nice to meet you :) - Hope you will be satisfied with our "soup family" - we are many .. but has plenty of room for you too- PoetrySoup Rule1: Be kind and keep PoetrySoup a haven. PoetrySoup is a drama free zone(Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours.) Thank you posted your words and thoughts here, I want to come back to read more another day. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 6/11/2014 4:41:00 AM
Nice to meet you too Anne:) Yes I'm overwhelmed and really glad to be part of PoetrySoup family. Hugs...
Date: 6/4/2014 8:22:00 PM
Angelyn,, Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. I will get much delight, in reading and in time become familiar with your verse. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile, others passed, when I first join the soup 4 years ago. I wish you the best when it comes to your compositions. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
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Date: 6/4/2014 9:26:00 PM
Hi SKAT! Thank you so much for the warm welcome:) Looking forward to meeting new friends here. I know you are all nice... I'm so excited to share my poems and a bit of myself and also to read compositions of other poets that will surely inspire me to write more.
Date: 6/4/2014 1:20:00 PM
Welcome to PoetrySoup, Angelyn. Here's hoping you enjoy getting to know people in this community, Keep writing and enjoy reading the poetry of others. If you comment on other's poems, many will return the favor. Best wishes.
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Date: 6/4/2014 10:48:00 PM
Hi Faye:) I'm really glad I came across to PoetrySoup. This is the best site for someone like me who love to write poems. Writing is my passion since childhood days. If before, poetry writing for me is just an outlet I just threw away my writings thinking that nobody will appreciate it. Now, I am more inspired to write more. Thanks
Date: 6/4/2014 11:34:00 AM
Angelyn, , A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you enjoy the community, as I did when I first join, March 2010. You'll find many friendly poets, who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I want to be the first to invite you on over, to the contest page. I OFFER MY CONTEST, in hopes it inspires you to write another poem. I'm looking forward to following you and your poetry ha-ha a special pair:) here's the link to the contest page. http://www.poetrysoup.com/poetry_contests/ <---~Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@"
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Date: 6/4/2014 10:10:00 PM
Thank you Linda. You're all sweet and nice. It's my pleasure to be part of this wonderful community... And oh, there's a contest page! I'm so excited to join.. I'm not a good writer, I'm not even very good in English... I just write with my heart. But I will try my best to express myself and be a better poet. Just by reading all your welcome note for me made me feel at home and it gave me extra boost to continue writing. love ya!...
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