Lost Love

Deep in solitude
I hope to reduce the magnitude
Pain in my heart makes it protrude
Of my so called dove
That made an intrude
I fell n love-
Am sure it was a ditch
Now I am in need of a severe stitch
After this unpolite breach.
I was torn apart
With the hope to convert
Eye saw she was the one 
But now she has won
In causing me torment
No option but to lament
She moved on so quick
I must be so dumb and thick
Not to read between the lines
Or see the changes in trend
I always tried to ammend
But everytime, the rules I bend.
Deep in my soul
I feel in need of an overhaul.
To me I thought you'd stay
But now you leave me to stray.
I think about how you think
Clearly so shallow
After the things I swallow
From your verbal vommit
Yet to my heart I permit
Anger, avoids to emmit
But she claims I am wrong
Yet daily I sing our song
And hope the pain will not prolong.
Juggled my emotions 
I am strangled in my devotion.
I hope karma
Will come- ah!
And my tears
Will turn to spears
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Gentry Avatar
February 25, 2016 at 10:55 PM
Congratulations on your win!
Cheema Avatar
February 25, 2016 at 9:57 AM
Congrats on your placement Teddy!
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February 25, 2016 at 7:16 AM
Hi Teddy. Congrats for your placement in the contest!!! ;-)
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February 24, 2016 at 4:17 AM
Wow a lovely poem teddy.. no wonder a great win.. big congrats!
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February 23, 2016 at 5:39 PM
Teddy, Congratulations on your awesome win. Love LINDA
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February 23, 2016 at 11:21 AM
Just wanted to thank you for entering my contest it was an honor reading:)
Dey Avatar
October 5, 2013 at 6:43 AM
Congratulations on your great win....
Taylor Avatar
September 29, 2013 at 12:24 PM
Way to go, Teddy. Nice going. Congrats. Ralph
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September 28, 2013 at 2:42 PM
Teddy, your winning poem ......... LOVE ~SKAT~
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September 28, 2013 at 5:32 AM
Congrats on the win in the contest, teddy
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September 27, 2013 at 7:50 PM
Teddy, Congratulations on your "Beloved Poem" win. xox~ LINDA
Davis Avatar
September 22, 2013 at 11:43 PM
this is so powerful and deep. Full of pain, sorrow, emotion, hurt and sorrow. The reader can feel what is in your heart. nice job
Damoney Avatar
September 15, 2013 at 11:10 PM
Love oh Love, why do you hurt so bad! From hurt to the hurtful. Good emotion.
Kithinji Avatar
September 15, 2013 at 4:59 PM
Great song you sing my broder! Let's see more of those spears.
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