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Lost Love

as rose petals guided her to her room she looked up to find her dream come true, she walked over to her bed and layed down as she looked up at the moon so blue. She heard a creak as he came out of here closet, he glided over to her and said " I have a secret". He layed down beside her and whispered in here ear, " i did this for you and only you" as down her face rolled a tear. she said " I love you for always as she stroked his face softly, He said " I love you too but its time for me to go as he faded away

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 4/6/2010 5:45:00 AM
Another nice poem Marissa. If you want poets here to read more of your poetry you should perhaps limit your posts to 3-5 per day. We try to be considerate to other poets here so that their poetry has a chance to be read also. I am just trying to help you out here. Thank you for writing and sharing with us. Love, Carol
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