Lost Love


Ductile banks are eroded by swelling stream, on the surging water the dislodged soils ride, unsure if they’d disappear in sea with dream, or would create a new land somewhere with pride. Lost love the broken heart can’t ever redeem, on upwelled tears the distraught emotions glide, unsure if they would get lost in soul opaque, or would build a new heart that won’t again break.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2024

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Bhattacharjee Avatar
March 11, 2024 at 6:39 AM
Passion in every line is very well expressed!
Sinha-Roy Avatar
March 14, 2024 at 11:57 PM
Many thanks for your visit and nice comment.
Rodrigues Avatar
March 7, 2024 at 7:14 AM
Very nice, Subimal! That last line, hopeful!
Sinha-Roy Avatar
March 14, 2024 at 11:57 PM
Belated thank you, Kim.
Rodgers Avatar
March 7, 2024 at 6:48 AM
Dear Subimal, You beautifully capture the tumultuous journey of heartbreak and the hope for redemption. The imagery of eroded banks and surging waters clearly depicts the pain and uncertainty of lost love. Your words reflect deeply, evoking raw emotions and profound introspection. Your talent for capturing the complexities of human emotions is genuinely commendable. - Blessings, Daniel
Sinha-Roy Avatar
March 14, 2024 at 11:57 PM
Belated thank you, Daniel for motivating me with your encouraging comments.
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