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Lost Love

Ductile banks are eroded by swelling stream, on the surging water the dislodged soils ride, unsure if they’d disappear in sea with dream, or would create a new land somewhere with pride. Lost love the broken heart can’t ever redeem, on upwelled tears the distraught emotions glide, unsure if they would get lost in soul opaque, or would build a new heart that won’t again break.

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Date: 3/11/2024 6:39:00 AM
Passion in every line is very well expressed!
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Subimal Sinha-Roy
Date: 3/14/2024 11:57:00 PM
Many thanks for your visit and nice comment.
Date: 3/7/2024 7:14:00 AM
Very nice, Subimal! That last line, hopeful!
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Subimal Sinha-Roy
Date: 3/14/2024 11:57:00 PM
Belated thank you, Kim.
Date: 3/7/2024 6:48:00 AM
Dear Subimal, You beautifully capture the tumultuous journey of heartbreak and the hope for redemption. The imagery of eroded banks and surging waters clearly depicts the pain and uncertainty of lost love. Your words reflect deeply, evoking raw emotions and profound introspection. Your talent for capturing the complexities of human emotions is genuinely commendable. - Blessings, Daniel
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Subimal Sinha-Roy
Date: 3/14/2024 11:57:00 PM
Belated thank you, Daniel for motivating me with your encouraging comments.

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