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Lost Kodak Moment

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           a snap of a twig

           made by my careless footstep

           white tailed doe takes flight






For Rick's "Haiku You" contest

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Line Gauthier

April 16, 2018 at 9:20 PM

You put us right in the moment, Carrie. Well done.

James Fraser

April 13, 2011 at 12:04 PM

Yep, they sure have terrific hearing. Lovely Haiku Carrie....:)

Sara Kendrick

June 4, 2010 at 4:15 AM

But it is not really lost for you remember and now we know and can picture it...So we have seen your picture..Great write that should do well in the contest....Keep the creative pen flowing...Thanks for stopping by and commenting on my work..Sara

Raul Moreno

June 3, 2010 at 8:38 PM

Great haiku Carrie, nice use of imagery...Raul

Gert W. Knop

June 3, 2010 at 5:00 AM

What a pity that you've lost that Kodak Moment!!! Well written Haiku, Carrie and thank you for your kind comments...Love, Gert

Mac Mcgovern

June 2, 2010 at 12:45 PM

But, the vision of its passing reminds their are better pictures to be taken on a future day. Snapping a picture of a doe in retreat may another day yield a picture of a doe advancing. The two pictures then may become come one. A masterpiece.