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Lost Kodak Moment

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           a snap of a twig

           made by my careless footstep

           white tailed doe takes flight






For Rick's "Haiku You" contest

Copyright © Carrie Richards | Year Posted 2010

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Line Gauthier Date: 4/16/2018 9:20:00 PM You put us right in the moment, Carrie. Well done. Login to Reply

James Fraser Date: 4/13/2011 12:04:00 PM Yep, they sure have terrific hearing. Lovely Haiku Carrie....:) Login to Reply

Sara Kendrick Date: 6/4/2010 4:15:00 AM But it is not really lost for you remember and now we know and can picture it...So we have seen your picture..Great write that should do well in the contest....Keep the creative pen flowing...Thanks for stopping by and commenting on my work..Sara Login to Reply

Raul Moreno Date: 6/3/2010 8:38:00 PM Great haiku Carrie, nice use of imagery...Raul Login to Reply

Gert W. Knop Date: 6/3/2010 5:00:00 AM What a pity that you've lost that Kodak Moment!!! Well written Haiku, Carrie and thank you for your kind comments...Love, Gert Login to Reply

Mac Mcgovern Date: 6/2/2010 12:45:00 PM But, the vision of its passing reminds their are better pictures to be taken on a future day. Snapping a picture of a doe in retreat may another day yield a picture of a doe advancing. The two pictures then may become come one. A masterpiece. Login to Reply

Kabuteng P.Ink K. Date: 6/1/2010 10:54:00 PM oh my, I sure could feel that sense of regret over losing that Kodak moment! very well said in such a words, Carrie :) best of luck in the contest :) Login to Reply

Dr.Ram Mehta Date: 6/1/2010 10:24:00 PM A wonderful haiku with apt images Login to Reply

Doris Culverhouse Date: 6/1/2010 5:11:00 PM enjoyed Login to Reply

Amy Green Date: 6/1/2010 5:07:00 PM Another great image poem. Makes me feel like I am right there. Login to Reply

Sean Kelly Date: 6/1/2010 2:20:00 PM Dear oh Deer , you have captured a perfect fleeting Haiku moment , Carrie and best of luck in the contest ... Login to Reply

Michael J. Falotico Date: 6/1/2010 1:14:00 PM I like this alot Carrie... alot said in few words Login to Reply