Lost Kodak Moment

. a snap of a twig made by my careless footstep white tailed doe takes flight For Rick's "Haiku You" contest

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Line Gauthier

Date: 4/16/2018 9:20:00 PM

You put us right in the moment, Carrie. Well done.

James Fraser

Date: 4/13/2011 12:04:00 PM

Yep, they sure have terrific hearing. Lovely Haiku Carrie....:)

Sara Kendrick

Date: 6/4/2010 4:15:00 AM

But it is not really lost for you remember and now we know and can picture it...So we have seen your picture..Great write that should do well in the contest....Keep the creative pen flowing...Thanks for stopping by and commenting on my work..Sara

Raul Moreno

Date: 6/3/2010 8:38:00 PM

Great haiku Carrie, nice use of imagery...Raul

Gert W. Knop

Date: 6/3/2010 5:00:00 AM

What a pity that you've lost that Kodak Moment!!! Well written Haiku, Carrie and thank you for your kind comments...Love, Gert

Mac Mcgovern

Date: 6/2/2010 12:45:00 PM

But, the vision of its passing reminds their are better pictures to be taken on a future day. Snapping a picture of a doe in retreat may another day yield a picture of a doe advancing. The two pictures then may become come one. A masterpiece.

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 6/1/2010 10:54:00 PM

oh my, I sure could feel that sense of regret over losing that Kodak moment! very well said in such a words, Carrie :) best of luck in the contest :)