Lost Island of Dreams

Oh! little ship of stars
How you sail on spent dreams
Oars dipped in my torment

Raft of heaven, silent myth  
Sweet rainbow of delight
Float past dreams
That only I can know tonight

Wafts of incense, shadows rent
Candles flicker-dull and bright
Set sails of black my gallant knight

Ice tipped sunbeams,lost island
You were once, my zodiac
Adrift on a selfish  sea
You are not my reality

Sail to the memories, I kiss
Lest  we should both forget
An endless, frozen sea
Between a paradise of bliss

Premiere Contest number 11
Contest Judged:  9/19/2016 12:00:00 AM
Sponsored by: SKAT A 
Second Place
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Scars Avatar
September 21, 2016 at 8:21 AM
Suzanne- lovely poem :) congratulations on your placement :)-luloo
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September 20, 2016 at 9:15 AM
I enjoyed this emotive piece, congrats on your high placement.
A  Avatar
September 19, 2016 at 10:16 PM
Love it and Love it Suzanne, Congratulations on your awesome win. Stop by my blog "ROSES STINK." Celebrate with me. **SKAT**
Mannan Avatar
July 16, 2013 at 11:09 PM
So romantic and deep. Loved it, its pain and beauty.
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